~ I Am Not Perfect ~
A poem about welcoming and accepting flaws. To encourage oth8 total reviews
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about how imperfect we are, but that doesn't matter, when we are happy who we are and enjoy life and love others while others love us too, we are as close to perfection as we can be.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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A very well-written poem about how imperfect we are, but that doesn't matter, when we are happy who we are and enjoy life and love others while others love us too, we are as close to perfection as we can be.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very much for your comment and rating!! That means a great deal to me. xoxo
Comment from kiwijenny
I love the last stanza best ...I am a teacher and love it...we are all flawed and your poem shows that
I loved it
Support and love each one for being themselves
On this journey you'll see we are just beautiful creatures
Loving yourself and others with flaws while being teachers
God bless
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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I love the last stanza best ...I am a teacher and love it...we are all flawed and your poem shows that
I loved it
Support and love each one for being themselves
On this journey you'll see we are just beautiful creatures
Loving yourself and others with flaws while being teachers
God bless
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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I'm so glad you enjoyed this poem. It was a lot of fun to write but most importantly thru the humor it has a message that you caught on too 😀 I appreciate your comment and rating as well. By the way...teachers ROCK!! Our children would be totally lost (parents too) without having you guys xoxo
Comment from Old Soldier
True. That's why there's so any beauty products on the market today. Buy this or that you get ten years younger. The only thing you get is broke. Its the word we live in. Nice write and true to life. Give " what color are your issues " a read. Something similar.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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True. That's why there's so any beauty products on the market today. Buy this or that you get ten years younger. The only thing you get is broke. Its the word we live in. Nice write and true to life. Give " what color are your issues " a read. Something similar.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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You're exactly right Old Soldier!! These companies want do my h money for products that don't actually work miracles anyways!!
I'm so happy you enjoyed this poem. Thank you for the lovely comment and rating too. It means a lot!!
xoxo
Comment from Scarbrems
Nice little poem about the flaws you see in the mirror. I reckon most of us could identify with that. Queens age like the rest of us. I like to think Queen Elizabeth probably looks at pictures of her standing next to Meghan Markle and sighs a bit.
At least I know the whole world isn't watching me get old. Still, as long as you have your health, eh?
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Nice little poem about the flaws you see in the mirror. I reckon most of us could identify with that. Queens age like the rest of us. I like to think Queen Elizabeth probably looks at pictures of her standing next to Meghan Markle and sighs a bit.
At least I know the whole world isn't watching me get old. Still, as long as you have your health, eh?
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very much for the wonderful comment and rating 😀 I am truly grateful xoxo
Comment from Y. M. Roger
This is hilarious! Oh my goodness...still giggling at some of your lines!! You have a wonderful way with words in this piece -- thank you so very much for sharing it with all of us out here & good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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This is hilarious! Oh my goodness...still giggling at some of your lines!! You have a wonderful way with words in this piece -- thank you so very much for sharing it with all of us out here & good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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😀 I am so happy you liked this. Thank you for the comment and rating that made my day xoxo
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks welcoming and accepting flaws in life because no one on earth is perfect as none can achieve perfection, change is absolute; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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This speaks welcoming and accepting flaws in life because no one on earth is perfect as none can achieve perfection, change is absolute; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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I'm so happy you enjoyed!! Thank you for the great comment and rating as well 😀 xoxo
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, I'm sure you are not the woman you paint in the picture, LOL We can be our worst critics, especially women. I liked this light-hearted look at aging. It read well, and very funny in places. I think it will have broad appeal, and thank you for sharing your writing, Ana.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Hello, I'm sure you are not the woman you paint in the picture, LOL We can be our worst critics, especially women. I liked this light-hearted look at aging. It read well, and very funny in places. I think it will have broad appeal, and thank you for sharing your writing, Ana.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you so very much for the great kind comment and high rating!! You made my night....😀
Comment from Reginald Drake
Very nice poem. The overall theme is one of encouragement as we should all accept our flaws no matter what they are. Perhaps the poem could have expanded flaws to character or interpersonal flaws rather than just physical but still I really enjoyed this .
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Very nice poem. The overall theme is one of encouragement as we should all accept our flaws no matter what they are. Perhaps the poem could have expanded flaws to character or interpersonal flaws rather than just physical but still I really enjoyed this .
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your honesty
