Comment from Angela Hayes

Excellent

Good read, interesting and educational, well presented, poem about summer and bees, good topic, image to match, vibrant flower and a bee ready to settle on it, easy to read.

Good Luck!

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for a most encouraging review zanya

Comment from Alexander Vasa

Excellent

Hello, good poem for the writing prompt. It is quite scary what is happening to our bees. I don't think people join the dots and realize what it means. I think this poem understands the problem and writes about it very poetically. Thanks for sharing your poem, which I found a pleasure to read and review, Ana.

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Yes I think we haven't quite woken up yet to the plight of the bee. thanks for a great review zanya

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

Life of a bee is nowadays weak after summer they are getting sick from use of pesticides in flowers and man will get less honey for their own follies; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 25-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 28-Jun-2018

Thanks for reading zanya