Forgiveness
Acrostic57 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
I've always struggled with this forgiveness thing. I can't forgive a couple people. I don't think you can forgive certain things but I can forgive most things. This is something to maybe strive for someday though.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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I've always struggled with this forgiveness thing. I can't forgive a couple people. I don't think you can forgive certain things but I can forgive most things. This is something to maybe strive for someday though.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, understanding is a big step****kahpot
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, kahpot, with your acrostic entry for the contest. You formatted the lines well--the first letter being capitalized is great. Your message comes through loud & clear, too. I like the way your notes offer an idea of what forgiveness means without telling us what your poem means. I like how your poem begins & ends with the same word. Good job & best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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You did a great job, kahpot, with your acrostic entry for the contest. You formatted the lines well--the first letter being capitalized is great. Your message comes through loud & clear, too. I like the way your notes offer an idea of what forgiveness means without telling us what your poem means. I like how your poem begins & ends with the same word. Good job & best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, your review and understanding mean a lot to me****kahpot
Comment from Phil Czekner
Forgiveness is one aspect of life that many struggle with, I know I do. An inspirational piece that makes me hope that one day I will find the strength the forgive those that have wronged me. Excellent work.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Forgiveness is one aspect of life that many struggle with, I know I do. An inspirational piece that makes me hope that one day I will find the strength the forgive those that have wronged me. Excellent work.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you, I think the forgiveness comes not from the act of betrayal but for the reason why and if we can accept this then hope is lost****kahpot
Comment from Reginald Drake
Very nice poem. I think the choice of your image was unique as well, which to me represents that "road" to forgiveness you mention at the end. From the beginning of the poem you give a great definition as to what forgiveness truly means and how even when one strays from the beaten path it is important not to judge and allow a person to make mistakes along the way. Well done, reminds me of the biblical parable, "The Prodigal Son"
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Very nice poem. I think the choice of your image was unique as well, which to me represents that "road" to forgiveness you mention at the end. From the beginning of the poem you give a great definition as to what forgiveness truly means and how even when one strays from the beaten path it is important not to judge and allow a person to make mistakes along the way. Well done, reminds me of the biblical parable, "The Prodigal Son"
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, understanding is a big part****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Excellent acrostic poem, Kahpot. The lines flow together and the overall meaning is consistent from start to finish.
My only recommendation is to bold the first letters if you can. This is really good and I wish you all good luck in the contest. :)
Gloria
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Excellent acrostic poem, Kahpot. The lines flow together and the overall meaning is consistent from start to finish.
My only recommendation is to bold the first letters if you can. This is really good and I wish you all good luck in the contest. :)
Gloria
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, I did try to bold the letters as you did but unsure how many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Thomas Bowling
This is an excellent description of forgiveness. To forgive as God does means to not even remember the wrong was ever done. For I will be merciful to their iniquities, And their sins will I remember no more.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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This is an excellent description of forgiveness. To forgive as God does means to not even remember the wrong was ever done. For I will be merciful to their iniquities, And their sins will I remember no more.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from A. Willow Bends
Forgiveness has not always come easy to me, so this poem jumped on me with both feet. You did this with style, creativity and a real sense of how one works to forgive. Very nicely done by the way! Forgiveness often takes time. Writing about it is very good therapy.
Great job!
Wendy
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Forgiveness has not always come easy to me, so this poem jumped on me with both feet. You did this with style, creativity and a real sense of how one works to forgive. Very nicely done by the way! Forgiveness often takes time. Writing about it is very good therapy.
Great job!
Wendy
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and I think it doesn't come easily to anyone****kahpot
Comment from Yemima Kebede1
Yes! Great! I love this! You are seriously an amazing poet. You have entered an amazing entry for the contest. Best of luck to you! Keep up the great work. Thank you for sharing this outstanding poem. Good luck!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Yes! Great! I love this! You are seriously an amazing poet. You have entered an amazing entry for the contest. Best of luck to you! Keep up the great work. Thank you for sharing this outstanding poem. Good luck!
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Wow! Thank you very much for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Hugh McDowell
Excellent work. Nice flow and pacing. This seems a difficult format. Your work makes it look easy. I love the last line. Forgiveness to work has to be a two or more person affair. Very good job.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Excellent work. Nice flow and pacing. This seems a difficult format. Your work makes it look easy. I love the last line. Forgiveness to work has to be a two or more person affair. Very good job.
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from pome lover
I give you a six, not only for your poem which is thoughtful and wise,
but for your attitude and the way you think.
Also it is beautifully written. good for you and good luck in the contest.
pome lover
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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I give you a six, not only for your poem which is thoughtful and wise,
but for your attitude and the way you think.
Also it is beautifully written. good for you and good luck in the contest.
pome lover
Comment Written 26-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Wow! Thank you for your wonderful review****kahpot
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you're most welcome.
pome lover
