Forgiveness
Acrostic57 total reviews
Comment from Air Spirit
Excellent! Such an important commentary and attitude to have while living life! It is so ugly and draining to retain the anger and be unwilling to forgive for a wrong-doing... it is called a mistake, because it was wrong... but people often don't accept responsibility for their mis-steps.. and mis-haps... but we are left bereft with anger --- and until we can forgive them, (certainly not condoning their behavior as you explained), we will be at war with ourselves... Very meaningful poem -- great advice, not only from a practical standpoint, but a spiritual one as well... Thanks for sharing and for your inspiration!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Excellent! Such an important commentary and attitude to have while living life! It is so ugly and draining to retain the anger and be unwilling to forgive for a wrong-doing... it is called a mistake, because it was wrong... but people often don't accept responsibility for their mis-steps.. and mis-haps... but we are left bereft with anger --- and until we can forgive them, (certainly not condoning their behavior as you explained), we will be at war with ourselves... Very meaningful poem -- great advice, not only from a practical standpoint, but a spiritual one as well... Thanks for sharing and for your inspiration!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and sometimes it must depend on the action we are trying to forgive, very helpful and encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from LateBloomer
Hello Kahpot, A thought-provoking Acrostic. K, your poem read so smoothly that I did not realize it was an Acrostic until I saw that it was an Acrostic poetry contest, and that's a very good thing. You've penned a wonderful poem of forgiveness and acceptance. I especially liked:
Giving acceptance when doubt still divides
(My only after-thought was that you might consider using a word like "support or encouragement, etc." instead of acceptance. K, this is your poem, and I deduct no points for my personal point of view which is ... a person may forgive, but they will not forget--how can they erase something from their mind--and that's why I suggest words like "support or encouragement, etc." vs. acceptance ... and that is one of the great reasons why I've found your poem to be thought-provoking. Your photo choice complements your poem, and I like that it is a black and white photo for other symbolic reasons ... if only life was as simple as black and white, and there were no other colors to cloud our mind ... if only.
A poem of love, reconciliation, and hope for the future. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Hello Kahpot, A thought-provoking Acrostic. K, your poem read so smoothly that I did not realize it was an Acrostic until I saw that it was an Acrostic poetry contest, and that's a very good thing. You've penned a wonderful poem of forgiveness and acceptance. I especially liked:
Giving acceptance when doubt still divides
(My only after-thought was that you might consider using a word like "support or encouragement, etc." instead of acceptance. K, this is your poem, and I deduct no points for my personal point of view which is ... a person may forgive, but they will not forget--how can they erase something from their mind--and that's why I suggest words like "support or encouragement, etc." vs. acceptance ... and that is one of the great reasons why I've found your poem to be thought-provoking. Your photo choice complements your poem, and I like that it is a black and white photo for other symbolic reasons ... if only life was as simple as black and white, and there were no other colors to cloud our mind ... if only.
A poem of love, reconciliation, and hope for the future. As this is a contest entry, I wish you good luck. LateBloomer
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and your choice of words are excellent, I shall look into your great suggestion, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your acrostic poem about forgiveness. You did a wonderful job with this poem and I loved the definitions found within each line. Each and every part of this piece relates to the theme of forgiveness.
My one suggestion would be to do an edit to use the Advanced Editor. Make the first letter of each line stand out - either make the font BOLD or use a different color to set it apart.
~patty~
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Hi there,
Thank you for sharing your acrostic poem about forgiveness. You did a wonderful job with this poem and I loved the definitions found within each line. Each and every part of this piece relates to the theme of forgiveness.
My one suggestion would be to do an edit to use the Advanced Editor. Make the first letter of each line stand out - either make the font BOLD or use a different color to set it apart.
~patty~
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and for the idea about advanced editor I shall try this as I couldn't figure out to make letters bold****kahpot
Comment from Mastery
Hello, Kahpot. I see you won a contest recently. Good for you. You are very talented, indeed in my opinion.
This acrostic is good because it doesn't show signs of "strain" that I so often see in these pieces when the poet tries so desperately to find a rhyme and fit for each of the letters.
Bravo! Bob
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Hello, Kahpot. I see you won a contest recently. Good for you. You are very talented, indeed in my opinion.
This acrostic is good because it doesn't show signs of "strain" that I so often see in these pieces when the poet tries so desperately to find a rhyme and fit for each of the letters.
Bravo! Bob
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
Well done acrostic on what forgiveness is and what it does for the one who forgives and the forgiven.
Hope you do well in the contest.
Keep writing
dp
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Well done acrostic on what forgiveness is and what it does for the one who forgives and the forgiven.
Hope you do well in the contest.
Keep writing
dp
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You are very kindly welcome.
dp
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written acrostic poem about forgiveness. We are all human and we need constant forgiveness from God and others. Sometimes we need to forgive ourselves too.
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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A very well-written acrostic poem about forgiveness. We are all human and we need constant forgiveness from God and others. Sometimes we need to forgive ourselves too.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from misscookie
You photo and your words are a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to the last
One of the biggest and greatest thing you can do in your lifer is to forgive that is the only you can remove those burden in your life
You you can forgive yet never forget
thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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You photo and your words are a perfect match
you captured my attention from the first line to the last
One of the biggest and greatest thing you can do in your lifer is to forgive that is the only you can remove those burden in your life
You you can forgive yet never forget
thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You're very welcome, Take care
Cookie
Comment from meeshu
such a good acrostic, Kahpot. I absolutely love the first line "empathize without acquittal" excellent verbiage. you have a lot to say in this work.........meeshu
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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such a good acrostic, Kahpot. I absolutely love the first line "empathize without acquittal" excellent verbiage. you have a lot to say in this work.........meeshu
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Hitcher
Forgiveness can be a very difficult journey to take for many friend. The abuse some have endured/survived is a path they never want to walk down again, in any way shape of form.
I did enjoy Your acrostic mate, it was nicely put together and read smoothly between lines(many struggle with that). The message was a strong one and points to a path/way where one could find peace and help others do the same... Nice!
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Forgiveness can be a very difficult journey to take for many friend. The abuse some have endured/survived is a path they never want to walk down again, in any way shape of form.
I did enjoy Your acrostic mate, it was nicely put together and read smoothly between lines(many struggle with that). The message was a strong one and points to a path/way where one could find peace and help others do the same... Nice!
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you, your review is very well said and I agree some paths are never to be taken again, I was intending to offer another path, I will have to look at my wording, many thanks my Freind****kahpot
Comment from Pamusart
Hi kahpot. This is a good entry for the contest. I had to forgive both of my parents. My dad for abandoning me, my mom for horrific abuse. You are absolutely right that forgiveness is not acquitally. It is clemency. Very well written poem. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Hi kahpot. This is a good entry for the contest. I had to forgive both of my parents. My dad for abandoning me, my mom for horrific abuse. You are absolutely right that forgiveness is not acquitally. It is clemency. Very well written poem. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 27-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for understanding and sorrow for your pain****kahpot
