Forgiveness
Acrostic57 total reviews
Comment from bobbie sanders
What we all need to know and understand when it comes to forgiveness, the Bible say, we all are sinners saved by the grace of God. Your poem sends a message on forgiveness, and if it comes from the heart, that's good, God looks into the hearts of man. We need all the sources of information we can get on the subject. Thank you, very informative. Loved it.
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What we all need to know and understand when it comes to forgiveness, the Bible say, we all are sinners saved by the grace of God. Your poem sends a message on forgiveness, and if it comes from the heart, that's good, God looks into the hearts of man. We need all the sources of information we can get on the subject. Thank you, very informative. Loved it.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Excellent! I love how your poem starts and ends with forgiveness. It also spells forgiveness vertically.
The line of each letter is also coherent.
A good write. Best of luck.
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Excellent! I love how your poem starts and ends with forgiveness. It also spells forgiveness vertically.
The line of each letter is also coherent.
A good write. Best of luck.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You're very welcome.
Comment from kiwisteveh
Many acrostic poems turn out like little more than shopping lists, but you do a good job here of combining meaning and natural flow with the demands of the initial letter.
Forgiveness is hard, isn't it? And we need to forgive those who find it impossible to forgive!
Steve
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Many acrostic poems turn out like little more than shopping lists, but you do a good job here of combining meaning and natural flow with the demands of the initial letter.
Forgiveness is hard, isn't it? And we need to forgive those who find it impossible to forgive!
Steve
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
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Thank you and yes depending on the action we are trying to forgive it can be very hard****kahpot
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello kahpot
What I like about your Acrostic poem is how you tell us in each letter of Forgiveness
explains what the word Forgiveness means and telling us your quote==
So together we'll join that road to forgiveness
Gert
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Hello kahpot
What I like about your Acrostic poem is how you tell us in each letter of Forgiveness
explains what the word Forgiveness means and telling us your quote==
So together we'll join that road to forgiveness
Gert
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
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You are welcome kahpot
Gert
Comment from Pantygynt
What you are saying in this acrostic of Forgiveness, does indeed define the word itself and the whole has a metrical feel to it while not conforming rigidle to any metrical patter. Also there are several good examples of enjambment here which, if absent tends to render these acrostics a mere list, and this is certainly more than that.
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What you are saying in this acrostic of Forgiveness, does indeed define the word itself and the whole has a metrical feel to it while not conforming rigidle to any metrical patter. Also there are several good examples of enjambment here which, if absent tends to render these acrostics a mere list, and this is certainly more than that.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
Comment from TPAC
I thought this was a great presentation under this style of write. I found the views stated to be compelling bring out the higher aspects in its read. All in my opinion of this work.
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I thought this was a great presentation under this style of write. I found the views stated to be compelling bring out the higher aspects in its read. All in my opinion of this work.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Shanbreen
Kahpot, I love the poem for the philosophy it portrays. Many of us have a belief that forgiveness has to be in its entirety. Your suggestion is much more beneficial:
"Visions of faith and a chance to believe
Errors they've made just a path in their life "
Thank you for sharing.
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Kahpot, I love the poem for the philosophy it portrays. Many of us have a belief that forgiveness has to be in its entirety. Your suggestion is much more beneficial:
"Visions of faith and a chance to believe
Errors they've made just a path in their life "
Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Deirdre Anne Gialamas
Dear Kahput,
This was a very smooth, flowing poem, wonderfully paced and
with a very well- worded conclusion.
I didn't know what an 'acrostic' poem was, even though it certainly had
a Greek sound to it. Now I know, having looked it up, and remain even more in awe of your work! To have accomplished the requirements so successfully in such an apparently effortless manner is commendable.
The sentiment expressed inside is clear and worthwhile.
Warmest wishes, Deirdre Anne
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Dear Kahput,
This was a very smooth, flowing poem, wonderfully paced and
with a very well- worded conclusion.
I didn't know what an 'acrostic' poem was, even though it certainly had
a Greek sound to it. Now I know, having looked it up, and remain even more in awe of your work! To have accomplished the requirements so successfully in such an apparently effortless manner is commendable.
The sentiment expressed inside is clear and worthwhile.
Warmest wishes, Deirdre Anne
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your wonderful and inspiring review****kahpot
Comment from CD Richards
This is perhaps the best exposition of the meaning of forgiveness I've come across. Additionally, I can't find fault with it, and for those reasons it earns my last six star rating for the week. Forgiveness is something the world could do with a lot more of.
Very nice job,
Craig
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This is perhaps the best exposition of the meaning of forgiveness I've come across. Additionally, I can't find fault with it, and for those reasons it earns my last six star rating for the week. Forgiveness is something the world could do with a lot more of.
Very nice job,
Craig
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
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Wow! Thank you very much your review is truly inspiring, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from The Death
It's a wonderful acrostic! Loved the word choice. Your poem has fine flow, which is hard to achieve when it comes to these forms. I liked the uplifting tones your words carry. It's all about being compassionate and helping each other. You deliver a lovely message here. Good luck!
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It's a wonderful acrostic! Loved the word choice. Your poem has fine flow, which is hard to achieve when it comes to these forms. I liked the uplifting tones your words carry. It's all about being compassionate and helping each other. You deliver a lovely message here. Good luck!
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review****kahpot
