The Priest
It is human nature to love another human being.3 total reviews
Comment from dragonpoet
This is a short, concise definition of a priest. It is sad that many are so lonely. You can see this need to be a father in the way the best priests treat the children of their
parish.
Keep writing
Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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This is a short, concise definition of a priest. It is sad that many are so lonely. You can see this need to be a father in the way the best priests treat the children of their
parish.
Keep writing
Joan
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Your encouragement to keep writing is greatly appreciated. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Yes, my best friend of 30 years is a priest and his life full but somewhat empty at times. He is a magnificent shepherd.
Blessings,
Brigitte
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No problem, Britgitte. Blessings to you too.
Joan
Comment from Scarbrems
A thoughtful piece. I like the play on 'Father', at the end. Has he found himself in love with his god, and truly wanting to be a 'Father' in the religious sense, as the capital letter suggests?
I've often thought it must be a lonely life, unless you truly achieve comfort and love from your god. Well written and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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A thoughtful piece. I like the play on 'Father', at the end. Has he found himself in love with his god, and truly wanting to be a 'Father' in the religious sense, as the capital letter suggests?
I've often thought it must be a lonely life, unless you truly achieve comfort and love from your god. Well written and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Yes, my best friend of 30 years is a priest and his life full but somewhat empty at times. He is a magnificent shepherd.
Blessings,
BrigitteThan
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, good entry for 'the life of a ... ' prompt, best of luck with this rather quirky entry. I liked the journey, and the play on words, it was good and so was your publishing choices, but you do have one error I will bring to your attention, you'll fix it in a jiffy, cheers, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana :)
Alas, he finds (he finds - delete) himself in love.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Hello, good entry for 'the life of a ... ' prompt, best of luck with this rather quirky entry. I liked the journey, and the play on words, it was good and so was your publishing choices, but you do have one error I will bring to your attention, you'll fix it in a jiffy, cheers, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana :)
Alas, he finds (he finds - delete) himself in love.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Your encouragement to keep writing is greatly appreciated. Thank you for taking the time to read and review. Yes, my best friend of 30 years is a priest and his life full but somewhat empty at times. he is a magnificent shepherd. I do appreciate the correction, an oversight on my part.
Blessings,
Brigitte