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I am a Virgo

Virgos are?

15 total reviews 
Comment from ronnie k
Exceptional
This work has reached the exceptional level

Loved this, it was an adventure indeed, I was taken by the first reading so I went and placed in my space giving this gem just for me LOL. Than you

 Comment Written 24-Jun-2018

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Dear Ronnie Thank you for your review and the AWESOME SIX stars. This was presented exactly as it was written in the first draft which doesn't happen very often. The words just flowed from my fingers to the keyboard. Inspiration at work! cheers Cass
Comment from Rasmine
Good
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Hello,

I found just a few nits:

My days are filed (filled) with busy -ness (busier, busiest, poetic license?)
Yet sometimes I day dream (daydream)
When others lose their composure
I am still and cold like ice (good lines. I am a Virgo and I see this too)
No-one (no -)sees the cauldron
Boiling beneath the surface.

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 Comment Written 23-Jun-2018

reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
    Dear Rasmine, thank you for your review and the four stars.(dear me, I am slipping. only four??!!!) Your comments and corrections are timely and correct so I'll "cop it sweet ". I haven't written anything in blank verse for ages so this is something new for me. cheers Cass
reply by Rasmine on 24-Jun-2018
    I thought you could correct it before the end of the contest. :) TC and good luck!
Comment from kiwijenny
Excellent
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My days are filed with busyness ....My days are filled ....busy-ness
I am a Gemini and completely different than you...I don't weigh things out but Go full throttle into things
Well penned
God bless

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
    Dear Jenny, thank you for your review and the five stars. I have corrected the spelling error. Thanks for pointing it out.I have experience with Geminis. They are quick and clever, but sometimes they jump in before they know what the situation is. cheers Cass
Comment from Ash Bleu
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Reminded me of my crazy sister who I love but sometimes she can be so extra! Lovely entry for the contest and capture of your zodiac sign! Good luck!!!

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
    Dear Ash, thank you for your review and the five stars. Your sister is (obviously) charming, erudite and scintillatingly delightful.
    You lucky girl to have such a sibling. Oh of course she is also self depreciating and humble. Like me! cheers Cass
Comment from Sharon Haiste
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I think this is a good entry for the The Zodiak Side of You writing prompt.
Your well written verse describes being a Virgo very well.
Well done and good luck with the competition.
Sharon

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 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
    Dear Sharon, thank you for your review and the five stars. It was written very quickly, but fortunately as the contest stated free verse, it came out rather better than I had expected. cheers Cass