I am a Virgo
Virgos are?15 total reviews
Comment from Ulla
Hi Cass, I liked this wonderful free verse poem a lot. It tells us about your star sign and what it really stands for and how it contribute to who you are. I wish I had a six left. It is so very well written. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Hi Cass, I liked this wonderful free verse poem a lot. It tells us about your star sign and what it really stands for and how it contribute to who you are. I wish I had a six left. It is so very well written. Good luck in the contest. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 28-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Dear Ulla thank you for your review and the five stars. This piece was posted exactly as it first came to me.It flowed off my fingers and onto the page. Usually I trim and shape and switch verses around barely making the deadline. This time with just an hour to go I sat down and wrote and it all happened. . Yay!! Wouldn't it be good if writing was always that easy?? Then again?!! The mystery of sitting down and dragging those words protestingly from the recesses of one;s mind is something unique, isn't it? Well this time it was easy next time it might not be. cheers Cass
Comment from Sandra Elizabeth Williams
Excellent! I like the flow of words that cascade into each verse. I especially like the last line "As a Virgo I am a Raven,
A Sapphire, a flower, a day
The things of the Earth
That are Virgo's own
Are me and I am a Virgo."
I wish you the very best in the competition.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Excellent! I like the flow of words that cascade into each verse. I especially like the last line "As a Virgo I am a Raven,
A Sapphire, a flower, a day
The things of the Earth
That are Virgo's own
Are me and I am a Virgo."
I wish you the very best in the competition.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your review and the five stars.It was an easy piece to do (this time) as the words flowed easily off my fingers and onto the page., without correction or change . Nice and easy this time. Next time maybe not. cheers Cass
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It was my pleasure!
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about Virgo, what makes a Virgo man, how important sign it is, and most of the plus points or attributes one finds in a Virgo personality; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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This speaks about Virgo, what makes a Virgo man, how important sign it is, and most of the plus points or attributes one finds in a Virgo personality; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Dear Friend, Thank you for your review and the five stars.or comments are most welcome .cheers Cass
Comment from Bill Schott
This biographical poem, I Am a Virgo, written in what I term as open verse, lists many attributes of the autumnal soul. Industrious, perceptive, and self-controlled are only a few of those qualities. Neat.
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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This biographical poem, I Am a Virgo, written in what I term as open verse, lists many attributes of the autumnal soul. Industrious, perceptive, and self-controlled are only a few of those qualities. Neat.
Comment Written 27-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jul-2018
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Dear Bill, Thank you for your review and the five stars. This piece was written and posted without any corrections or alterations from the first words I wrote. It flowed so well it surprised me. Usually I do several re-writes and switch verses around until it is to my liking, but this time I simply wrote and posted it. Cheers Cass
Comment from BeasPeas
This is excellent, Cass. As I may have told you I have studied astrology for years, even had clients and gave readings--one of my many interests. Loved your evaluation of your sign of Virgo. A fine sign, as you mention, industrious and focused. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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This is excellent, Cass. As I may have told you I have studied astrology for years, even had clients and gave readings--one of my many interests. Loved your evaluation of your sign of Virgo. A fine sign, as you mention, industrious and focused. Much luck in the contest with this fine entry. Marilyn
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Dear Marilyn, Woohoo another thing we have in common. I studied astrology for years under Bonnie Mathes one of Sth. Aust's. foremost teachers. And gave readings and did horoscopes for people. I didn't charge a lot though, and it became onerous, so I quit. I still have my books plus a 21st Century ephemeris, which I treasure because my late son Heath bought it for me. The inscription on the front page is so sweet and tender, his special words to me, his Mum. The contest was a minor triumph with me being awarded a shared second place. Thank you for the review and the AWESOME SIX stars. Very generous and kind. cheers Cass
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Hi Cass. Wow! We have so much in common. My favorite type of readings were karmic astrology. Lessons to achieve and pitfalls to avoid. It got burdensome because most people aren't in attuned to the "long haul." They want to know if "so-and-so" will call them for a date. Hugs, Marilyn
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Yep I know a few Virgos and yes they are very laid-back cool and not so easily moved by situations. And yes some a most attracted to nature or earthen objects. Thanks for sharing
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Yep I know a few Virgos and yes they are very laid-back cool and not so easily moved by situations. And yes some a most attracted to nature or earthen objects. Thanks for sharing
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Dear Mary, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Virgos are usually very cool and calm, but if we get disturbed out of our quietness, LOOK OUT!! MY husband has worked out over 5 decades of wedded "bliss" that to calm me down after an upset all he has to do is start a conversation about the garden. Whether he's planing on pruning a tree or a vine, or perhaps I'll have asked him to do something for me garden oriented and he'll bring that up and talk about it. Works every time. Yes,as an Earth sign I am calmed by the Earth and all its fullness. Mother Nature rules cheers Cass
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Yep I had a friend who was a Virgo by the name of Sylvia she was something else a little short thing I'm short but she was shorter than me and yep call me cool until you can get the tablet and then it's on and her down-to- Earth calm down was a joint of marijuana LOL
Comment from meeshu
this poem is well written and horoscopically accurate as far as I can tell. the Virgoes I know resemble what is described here. nice work, Cass........meeshu
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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this poem is well written and horoscopically accurate as far as I can tell. the Virgoes I know resemble what is described here. nice work, Cass........meeshu
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Dear Meeshu, Thank you for your review and the five stars.My dear! Really! How could a Virgo be anything BUT correct when speaking of something so intimately relevant as the star sign we are born under? Thank you for reading and your comments are well received and most welcome . cheers Cass
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how'd you like that word I made up, sounds scientiffical, huh.
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Astrologically speaking I am complimented beyond telling to have a NEW WORD made up just for me. I can't think of one to match it,so ten points to you. cheers Cass
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cheers.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written poem about your zodiac sign, the Virgo, someone who are strong and in control of emotions on who others can depend all the time when in need.
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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A very well-written poem about your zodiac sign, the Virgo, someone who are strong and in control of emotions on who others can depend all the time when in need.
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Dear Sandra, Thank you for your review and the five stars. Yes, thank you you are right about the "being dependable". There's been many a wet shoulder after someone has cried upon it. Ah well that's what life is all about isn't it? cheers Cass
Comment from Ricky1024
'I am A Virgo
was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were prefect and aligned perfectly with Descriptive Measures
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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'I am A Virgo
was well written with great theme and imagery.
It flowed well and read well with no grammar issues as well.
Adjective Content and Objective Content were prefect and aligned perfectly with Descriptive Measures
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Dear Ricky thank you for your review and the five stars.Your comments are generous and most welcome cheers Cass
Comment from Angela Hayes
Good read, educational, interesting, inspirational, spiritual, has a lot of meaning, easy to read, well presented, with image to match, creative, artistic and poetic. including angelic.
Good Luck!
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Good read, educational, interesting, inspirational, spiritual, has a lot of meaning, easy to read, well presented, with image to match, creative, artistic and poetic. including angelic.
Good Luck!
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Dear Angela, Thank you for your review and the AWESOME SIX stars. Your comments are most welcome and generous. Thanks again for the Sixer. cheers Cass
