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Geoff's Ramblings

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A Cure For Writer's Block.

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Comment from royowen
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I thought this particularly funny Geoff, you're tho hilariouth I can't believe it, thse doethnt need a paint brusthe thse's jutht Thowng off, ithn't thse? Well done, Geoff, itsth hard mate, well done Bro. Blessingth Roy

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
    Thanks mate. I always wanted to gwet into radio and stuff and I can't believe all the lithperth in the industry.
reply by royowen on 22-Jun-2018
    Hah hah
Comment from misscookie
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That was kinda cute to read
You captured my attention from the first line to the las
I have to remember that and if you don't mine send it to my pastor
thank you for sharing
Cookie

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
    Yeah cookie go right ahead I know he would get a laugh.Thanks for the great review. Lord Bless
reply by misscookie on 23-Jun-2018
    Good morning to you
    You're very welcome have a nice week end
    Cookie
Comment from Angela Hayes
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Good read, educational, interesting, well presented, image to match, creative use of words, funny, easy to read. story about a preacher and a painter.

Good Luck!

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
    Thanks Angela no contest abut appreciate you coming by.
reply by Angela Hayes on 22-Jun-2018
    You're welcome, Good Luck for your works in general! :)

Comment from barbara.wilkey
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I enjoyed reading your cute little joke. I'm sure the running paint wasn't too funny though. I was nice of the minister to give the man another chance. Thank you for sharing.

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
    Thanks Sis glad you came by. Getting these into my book of Ramblings hehe.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
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A very well-written little inside joke about the paint job that went bad when the painter add too much thinners it could not withstand the rainy weather and started to wash away.

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 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
    Did you get the play on words, Sis? Thanks for being "first cab off the rank!"
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
    Did you get the play on words, Sis? Thanks for being "first cab off the rank!"