Your Loving Light
Children are crying, help them.6 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
"Cry with the child that's crying." What better example of opening your heart to another person can there be? I can't think of one.
Spot on syllable count for the contest. Good luck. I hope you do well.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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"Cry with the child that's crying." What better example of opening your heart to another person can there be? I can't think of one.
Spot on syllable count for the contest. Good luck. I hope you do well.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you w.j. I guess I'm just a sentimental fool, but children can't speak for themselves.
Comment from mkflood
Nice plea. I do thank you for selecting my work. It does work well together. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Great job thanks again... MKFLOOD
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Nice plea. I do thank you for selecting my work. It does work well together. It is an honor to have my work included with yours. Great job thanks again... MKFLOOD
Comment Written 22-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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Thank you mkflood. We all care for the defenseless.
Comment from Bill Schott
This 5-7-5, Your Moving Light, has the proper seventeen syllable set up and requires us to not hide our light under a bussel, but hold it high and move forward.
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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This 5-7-5, Your Moving Light, has the proper seventeen syllable set up and requires us to not hide our light under a bussel, but hold it high and move forward.
Comment Written 22-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018
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You got it Bill. Thank you. Don't hide your feelings, do what you have to do.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Thank you for your poignant poem. Yours is a great presentation. Good job on the correct syllable count per line & great picture. I live not far from Tornillo, TX where a tent city is up to receive some kids from this issue. Yes, pray for the children, Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your poignant poem. Yours is a great presentation. Good job on the correct syllable count per line & great picture. I live not far from Tornillo, TX where a tent city is up to receive some kids from this issue. Yes, pray for the children, Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you Jan. This kind of breaks my heart.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, this is such a beautiful verse for the 5-7-5 poetry contest and I wish you the best of luck with this well written and beautifully published entry. The picture is so nice and sets just the right tone for the poem. I noticed no errors and your words are the words of truth, just lovely and thanks for sharing them, Ana.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Hello, this is such a beautiful verse for the 5-7-5 poetry contest and I wish you the best of luck with this well written and beautifully published entry. The picture is so nice and sets just the right tone for the poem. I noticed no errors and your words are the words of truth, just lovely and thanks for sharing them, Ana.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you Ana. Just speaking the truth.
Comment from Colette
Short concise and certainly to the point. I like it! Your entry is certainly true,
Don't wall your feelings
Cry with the child that's crying,
Your love is the Light.
who could disagree with the above? Best of luck in contest but more important, well written in my eyes.
Colette
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Short concise and certainly to the point. I like it! Your entry is certainly true,
Don't wall your feelings
Cry with the child that's crying,
Your love is the Light.
who could disagree with the above? Best of luck in contest but more important, well written in my eyes.
Colette
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thank you Colette. I'm glad you liked it.