Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Corn Fields, has the proper seventeen syllable set up and mixes in the poppies to possibly show us the stable of life mingled with the chance of death all about. Yes?

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thanks for reviewing zanya

Comment from LaFrance

Exceptional

Your 5-7-5 poem entry was great. It met all the contest requirements. Your poem was very nice read your words came off the so easy. I enjoyed it, good luck.

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Thanks for those encouraging words and 6 twinkling stars ..zanya

Comment from Brigitte Elko

Excellent

Yes, they do dance amid corn fields to a farmer's chagrin. This is well written and a viable entry for the contest. The picture is perfect as a representation of your well chosen words.
Blessings,
Brigitte

 Comment Written 20-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Great review -- great choice of word 'chagrin' zanya

reply by Brigitte Elko on 21-Jun-2018

I am a farmer's wife, lol.
brigitte

Comment from jlsavell

Excellent

author,

best wishes with the contest.. its imagery is stark and that is a great feat to accomplish with so few words..very well done..I don't think I have ever seen a field of poppies.

jlsavell

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Great review zanya

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent descriptive 5-7-5 poem
and entry for the contest with excellent summer imagery
The personification works well
and the presentation is very good
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Superb review zanya