Shock, horror
I wished that the ground could open and swallow me up.10 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
Wow--yes, quite embarrassing especially at age eighteen! Your use of the Loop form added to the intensity of the description of the experience. I hope all your "parts" were found to be in working order! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
Wow--yes, quite embarrassing especially at age eighteen! Your use of the Loop form added to the intensity of the description of the experience. I hope all your "parts" were found to be in working order! Best wishes in the contest- Joan
Comment Written 24-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 24-Jun-2018
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Thank you so much Joan for your great review.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
You did a great job, Jen, with this loop poem. Good use of the ending/beginning words that seem natural. There is great flow to your lines, too. Shame on that doctor for not telling you beforehand or even asking your permission to allow the students in the room. Best wishes. Jan
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
You did a great job, Jen, with this loop poem. Good use of the ending/beginning words that seem natural. There is great flow to your lines, too. Shame on that doctor for not telling you beforehand or even asking your permission to allow the students in the room. Best wishes. Jan
Comment Written 21-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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Thanks Jan. They didn't ask permission for anything in those days it was 1960.
Comment from meeshu
well they are going to be doctors, right? no, I imagine that was embarrassing, Jenin. a very nice touch writing a Loop for this contest.........meeshu
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
well they are going to be doctors, right? no, I imagine that was embarrassing, Jenin. a very nice touch writing a Loop for this contest.........meeshu
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018
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Many thanks meeshu.
Comment from kahpot
What an embarrassing memory to relive, Woe to be a Woman sometimes, I am a bit embarrassed to say I got quite a smile out of this wonderful Loop, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
What an embarrassing memory to relive, Woe to be a Woman sometimes, I am a bit embarrassed to say I got quite a smile out of this wonderful Loop, very well done and good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Thanks for your great review.
Comment from Ricky1024
This is a 'Embarrassing Loop Contest Entree rich in Theme and Imagery.
It flowed well read well with no grammar issues as well .
Adjective and Objective were both excellent and Descriptive Measures were firmly in place.
Thanks for this and good luck in the contest.
Dr. Ricky 1024
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
This is a 'Embarrassing Loop Contest Entree rich in Theme and Imagery.
It flowed well read well with no grammar issues as well .
Adjective and Objective were both excellent and Descriptive Measures were firmly in place.
Thanks for this and good luck in the contest.
Dr. Ricky 1024
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Many thanks.
Comment from royowen
In so many ways I think I'd rather be a man, childbirth is similar to what you experienced that day, a few day ago. A great entry in this loop poetry embarrassing moments contest, beautifully written, a very worthy, articulate entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
In so many ways I think I'd rather be a man, childbirth is similar to what you experienced that day, a few day ago. A great entry in this loop poetry embarrassing moments contest, beautifully written, a very worthy, articulate entry in this contest, well done, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Thanks Roy for your great review. Much appreciated.
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Well done Jen
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written loop poem and a very embarrassing moment to be exposed before so many male students and there is nothing you could do to prevent or predict the situation.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
A very well-written loop poem and a very embarrassing moment to be exposed before so many male students and there is nothing you could do to prevent or predict the situation.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Many thanks
Comment from Pamusart
Hi Jen. Men just do not understand, do they? Lol. I suppose they think a rectal is equivalent. We get rectals every time too. This is a good entry for the contest. I always get nervous whenever I hear that door open. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
Hi Jen. Men just do not understand, do they? Lol. I suppose they think a rectal is equivalent. We get rectals every time too. This is a good entry for the contest. I always get nervous whenever I hear that door open. Good luck in the contest. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Thanks a lot for the review. Much appreciated.
Comment from Old Soldier
I guess you where. Don't they ask if it's okay for students to observe? Nice poem good luck with the contest. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
I guess you where. Don't they ask if it's okay for students to observe? Nice poem good luck with the contest. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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They didn't ask in those days. It was 1960. Thanks for reviewing.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, you poor thing. Good loop poem for the contest and best of luck with this entry. It must have been so embarrassing. If it was during labor you probably wouldn't have cared, but just for your check-up, not want you're wanting ... LOL, It is kind of funny though, so it's good you've put it into verse. I think the picture is great, too, suits it so well. I have no suggestions for improvement and enjoyed reading your poem, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
Hello, you poor thing. Good loop poem for the contest and best of luck with this entry. It must have been so embarrassing. If it was during labor you probably wouldn't have cared, but just for your check-up, not want you're wanting ... LOL, It is kind of funny though, so it's good you've put it into verse. I think the picture is great, too, suits it so well. I have no suggestions for improvement and enjoyed reading your poem, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Many thanks, much appreciated.