silk poppy
3 5 3 poem2 total reviews
Comment from Ann Tran
What a delightful poem. Way to highlight water with 'sparkling in dew'. I enjoyed it with the beautiful poppy floating on water. Well done! All the best with the contest!
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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What a delightful poem. Way to highlight water with 'sparkling in dew'. I enjoyed it with the beautiful poppy floating on water. Well done! All the best with the contest!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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Thanks for the thoughtful review Ann. My garden with big fat poppies might just have prompted this one. Cheers, j
Comment from rspoet
This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
with wonderful imagery of the poppy and dew
and a nice touch of alliteration in the "s" words
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
with wonderful imagery of the poppy and dew
and a nice touch of alliteration in the "s" words
Excellent art work to match
Well done
Good luck in the contest
RS
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018
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Thanks for the generous review. The big patch of poppies out my window might just have prompted this one. Cheers. j