Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 3-5-3 Water writing prompt.
Your short verse has a good message.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 19-Jun-2018

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks about hasty water drunker, though the process is expressed but there is no feeling and I could not make any sense to relate anything; well presented; Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

Great poem! The picture looks awesome. I see waves in the ocean. This is a very good 3-5-3 writing prompt. Good luck in the contests. I see no mistakes of grammar at all.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018

Comment from Donka Kristeva

Good

I understand, though not completely, what the author is trying to say but the word choice do not connect with each other.

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

Man, are you hydrating!! someone said that to me once. funny guy. don't drink the whole ocean, leave some for others. good luck in the contest..

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Yikes you'd hallucinate if you drank the salty briny sea
It reminds me of the old adage...water water everYwhere but not a drop to drink
Well penned ...great picture
God bless

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018

Comment from Deirdre Anne Gialamas

Exceptional

Hi,
Just reading this made me have a sudden urge to get cold water from the fridge!
Perfect choice of words; felt like I 'd already drunk from the freshest mountain spring.
Warmest wishes,
Deirdre Anne

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is an excellent 3-5-3 poem and entry for the contest
with excellent description of the water
and a little alliteration
I'm a big water fan myself
Well done
Good luck in the contest
TS

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018