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Comment from Pamusart
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Hi Ricky. This is heartbreaking and poignant. I am so sorry for the loss of your son,
Jason. For, me. I did marry a real man. Cries easily during movies but still is a man. Just a caring one By now my organs may not be good but I am a donor. Please take care and know that your poem made me week. Love to you. Thank you for sharing

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
    Thanks again for your wonderful review and time.
    Ricky....
Comment from Gert sherwood
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Yes,tears with happy smiles Ricky from your feelings that a dad should be. Knowing you all what you said in your poem, you did for your son while it was with you.
Gert

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
    Father-Son connection?
    Unbreakable even in Death "Do Us Part...
    Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
    Dr Ricky 1024.
reply by Gert sherwood on 18-Jun-2018
    You are welcome Ricky
    Gert
Comment from karenina
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These are truly real men, who are not concerned with their machismo, but rather ever and always putting their children's needs first, as you did with Jason. More than that, when tragedy struck and you could do no more for Jason on earth, you made the ultimate decision of love and donated his organs. There is no greater love.....

Karenina

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
    "No Greater Love....
    "No Greater Commitment.
    ...
    "Father- Son?
    "Til Death Do Us Part?"
    Life moves on my friend but for some?
    Thanks for this and have a blessed day Ricky..
reply by karenina on 18-Jun-2018
    God Bless---Karenina
Comment from kiwijenny
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Amen amen amen
"Fathers Day"
"What exactly is...
'The Measure of a Man?
You are right a father is so much more than a mere man. He puts others before himself
God understands
God bless and thanks

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
    Again,
    Thanks for this and have a blessed day Miss kiwi.
    Ricky....
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
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What a wonderful piece for Father's Day. The wonderment and the questions combined make for a perfect piece. Your unique style is exceptional along with the wording

 Comment Written 18-Jun-2018


reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
    Glad you like Barb.
    This was supposed to be posted yesterday but my phone died!
    Ricky....