Death? No Problem
Jesus saves us from eternal death10 total reviews
Comment from ExperiencingLiphe
Are you okay? There seems to be a lot of poems on the death subject. You were able to get your message across in a very short poem but we all know what you're saying. Great job
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Are you okay? There seems to be a lot of poems on the death subject. You were able to get your message across in a very short poem but we all know what you're saying. Great job
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Besides having dental problems, an autoimmune issue and a back that needs surgery, I am fine. I am just on a mission to share what I truly believe occurs after we die.
jan
Comment from barbara.wilkey
In Jesus there is no death, only everlasting life. What a great promise for us!!! I enjoyed reading your contest entry. It was short and to the point with the proper amount of syllables. Good luck.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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In Jesus there is no death, only everlasting life. What a great promise for us!!! I enjoyed reading your contest entry. It was short and to the point with the proper amount of syllables. Good luck.
Comment Written 19-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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thanks, barbara
Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux
I like the message of this. You've summed up beautifully the answer to the death problem. He took away its sting and victory. I like how you've said so much in just a few words. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written poem. Well done yet again!
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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I like the message of this. You've summed up beautifully the answer to the death problem. He took away its sting and victory. I like how you've said so much in just a few words. Thanks for sharing this inspirational and well written poem. Well done yet again!
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Jeffrey, you are always so kind in your reviews - thanks so much
jan
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A very well-written 5-7-5 poem Jesus died for us to be able to free ourselves from sin. He arose three days later and is now waiting for us to meet Him in heaven for an eternal life with him.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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A very well-written 5-7-5 poem Jesus died for us to be able to free ourselves from sin. He arose three days later and is now waiting for us to meet Him in heaven for an eternal life with him.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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No way I could free myself from sin
love writing succinct poems about my Lord
thanks for the review
jan
Comment from kiwijenny
death is the problem
Jesus, the Ressurected,
the only answer
Amen amen amen...so succinct so true. I needed this today and everyday
God bless...I'm going to bookmark it
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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death is the problem
Jesus, the Ressurected,
the only answer
Amen amen amen...so succinct so true. I needed this today and everyday
God bless...I'm going to bookmark it
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you again for bookmarking my work
jan
Comment from Dolly'sPoems
A faithful write from the heart and I wish you luck with the contest, there is a warmeth in your words which are comforting and kind, best wishes, love Dolly x
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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A faithful write from the heart and I wish you luck with the contest, there is a warmeth in your words which are comforting and kind, best wishes, love Dolly x
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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you are most kind, Dolly
thanks for reading and reviewing
jan
Comment from meeshu
a very good devotional poem, rdfr. not much more can be said. you are quite clear in your beliefs and state as much....good poem.....meeshu
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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a very good devotional poem, rdfr. not much more can be said. you are quite clear in your beliefs and state as much....good poem.....meeshu
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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love writing succinct poems about my Lord
thanks for the review
jan
Comment from c_lucas
It's hard to view one as a Christian when they fear death. Jesus promises all who believes in Him, eternal life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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It's hard to view one as a Christian when they fear death. Jesus promises all who believes in Him, eternal life. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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love writing succinct poems about my Lord
you are so right, Charlie - it is an oxymoron for a Christian to fear death
thanks for the review
jan
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You're welcome, Jan.
Comment from kahpot
You have used your words very well in this 5-7-5 poem they certainly send your message clearly, with beautiful artwork, very well thought out good luck in your competition****kahpot
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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You have used your words very well in this 5-7-5 poem they certainly send your message clearly, with beautiful artwork, very well thought out good luck in your competition****kahpot
Comment Written 17-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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thank you so much
Comment from Alexander Vasa
Hello, this is a very appropriate poem for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. It is self-explanatory, but it is also a powerful declaration of your faith and hope in Jesus and his resurrection. I saw no errors, and best of luck with this entry, it is one I'd recommend, cheers, Ana.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Hello, this is a very appropriate poem for the 5-7-5 poetry contest. It is self-explanatory, but it is also a powerful declaration of your faith and hope in Jesus and his resurrection. I saw no errors, and best of luck with this entry, it is one I'd recommend, cheers, Ana.
Comment Written 17-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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thanks so much, Anastasia