The Book of Fine Poetry
Viewing comments for Chapter 72 "Retrieving the Soul"A Collection of My best works.
6 total reviews
Comment from mermaids
Your theme is a good one for a poem. The question about the soul is an age old one. Excellent use of words to create a poem that reflects life and the souls that walk among us.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Your theme is a good one for a poem. The question about the soul is an age old one. Excellent use of words to create a poem that reflects life and the souls that walk among us.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Thanks again for your wonderful review and time.
Ricky....
Comment from joycetreasures
Hello Rick1024,
This is a nicely written chapter in your book of fine poetry. You provided the antonyms and synonyms of many principles in life (great ones). Your image is great, looking into the soul also through the eyes. The content of this poem is very deep and makes you think about life and the end. Many do not receive a second chance, but life is good and a gift. Nicely written. I found no errors. I
do agree, some things are meant to be in life. Can the soul live on? I don't know. Thanks and happy writing.
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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Hello Rick1024,
This is a nicely written chapter in your book of fine poetry. You provided the antonyms and synonyms of many principles in life (great ones). Your image is great, looking into the soul also through the eyes. The content of this poem is very deep and makes you think about life and the end. Many do not receive a second chance, but life is good and a gift. Nicely written. I found no errors. I
do agree, some things are meant to be in life. Can the soul live on? I don't know. Thanks and happy writing.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 19-Jun-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time joyce!.
Dr Ricky 1024.
Children's Story Later!
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You are welcome.
Comment from Xia Thornwood
Nice poem. I like the way it sounds together. A few critiques: I am an Avengers geek, so I have to tell you that it's Bruce Banner, not Bob Banner. But sometimes switched up named are purposeful on the authors part, so that may be the reason. And secondly, from your notes, it appears you are talking about Christian salvation, but the poem sounded like it was talking about reincarnation at first. But I like your style, and the rhythm and words you used.
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Nice poem. I like the way it sounds together. A few critiques: I am an Avengers geek, so I have to tell you that it's Bruce Banner, not Bob Banner. But sometimes switched up named are purposeful on the authors part, so that may be the reason. And secondly, from your notes, it appears you are talking about Christian salvation, but the poem sounded like it was talking about reincarnation at first. But I like your style, and the rhythm and words you used.
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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It badically gonors thd dakken whpme go on with Donations.
And yes, it was Bruce not Bob.
Ricky....
Comment from meeshu
I like where this goes and the questioning spirit of it, but there are just too many typos or misspellings in the first third especially, to raise it to a 5 star work. and you have to get rid of "hotness". lots of potential here, Ricky..........meeshu
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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I like where this goes and the questioning spirit of it, but there are just too many typos or misspellings in the first third especially, to raise it to a 5 star work. and you have to get rid of "hotness". lots of potential here, Ricky..........meeshu
Comment Written 18-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thanks for your kind thoughts and review but I can't find any Grammar probs and what, are 'Hot Spots?'
Ricky
Comment from karenina
This is a very comprehensive poem...an in depth look at the philosophy of life, death, eternal life, etc. So many questions we can not have all the answers to, but I agree with you that the soul is the essence, it truly by faith lives on beyond this earth and so the consciousness is, I think, intertwined with that--this is why some are called "old souls"--they seem to have lived more or learned more while here on earth, regardless of the "age" they lived to.
Karenina
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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This is a very comprehensive poem...an in depth look at the philosophy of life, death, eternal life, etc. So many questions we can not have all the answers to, but I agree with you that the soul is the essence, it truly by faith lives on beyond this earth and so the consciousness is, I think, intertwined with that--this is why some are called "old souls"--they seem to have lived more or learned more while here on earth, regardless of the "age" they lived to.
Karenina
Comment Written 17-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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And thanks for your wonderful review and time Karenina.
Ricky...
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You are welcome Ricky...hope you are well!
Comment from tbacha58
Hi "They have been through so much!"
"So Much Pain...
"So Much suffering...
"So Much misery but...
"They are still here due to the miracle Of 'The Gift of Life!"
Hi Rickey wow, a huge difference since I left a year ago, you are still writing about death, but I love your new YOU. Very nice that poem it made me feel different, it touched my heart reading about both Death and Life. Bravo. Terry
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Hi "They have been through so much!"
"So Much Pain...
"So Much suffering...
"So Much misery but...
"They are still here due to the miracle Of 'The Gift of Life!"
Hi Rickey wow, a huge difference since I left a year ago, you are still writing about death, but I love your new YOU. Very nice that poem it made me feel different, it touched my heart reading about both Death and Life. Bravo. Terry
Comment Written 17-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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My writings and ability has intensified from the Very, Very, Trophy winning piece called...
"Buddy Friend"
Written only two weeks after the death of Jason.
April 14th, 2003
(My Favorite)
)Dedication for Jason's Friends)
"I'm not hear right Now...
'But I'm not Far...
"Its a place close By...
"Not far as a Star...
...
"You'll feel this Place...
"Just take a moment..
"You'll See...
"Then you will Know...
"Just Where...
"I'll Be...
With all my donated Heart...
Jason...
Jason Richard Smrkovsky
November 5th, 1984~
March 31st, 2003.
Organs Donated
April 1st, 2003
(April Fool's Day)
Miss You Jay
Happy Father's Day.
