Comment from nomi338

Excellent

if that is a female polar bear scooting along the ice with her hind parts up in the air and exposed to all, I hoe she realizes that she is open to a sneak attack from some lovesick lothario, bent on making a love connection. That, after all, is how little polar bears are made.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018

I thought baby polar bears were brought by flying penguins.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I love the way the bear is crawling along in the picture. I was a toddler in a Pampers commercial moving in a similar way. Wow! Those roadrunners must be everywhere. Maybe they got a special rate. Great description of taxis for takeoff. I can't imagine a flying polar bear. judi

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

If you see a small, rapidly-moving cloud, get your umbrella up quickly.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thanks for the animation and the clever, energized 5-7-5. I enjoyed your wordplay and alliteration. You make the polar bears' behaviors intriguing! Smiles- Joan

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks, Joan

Comment from brenda faye curtis

Excellent

Looks like this furry fellow is having a little fun on the ice! If he's looking for roadrunners, however, he's going to be hungry for a long time! Great poem and a very entertaining film!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks, Brenda

reply by brenda faye curtis on 21-Jun-2018

You're welcome, Bill.

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very cute and well written 5-7-5 about the polar bears and the road runners. You used very cute and good words with very neat imagery from the video. I enjoyed reading and reviewing. I saw no error or spag. Blessings, Teri

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks, Teri

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I wonder if this bear is bipolar....? Maybe he's taxiing like that because he has Polaroids
Sorry bad puns...are how eye roll.
Well penned and kinda crazy good
God bless

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks, Jenny. He?ll need to fly when the ice is gone.

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

that's called taxi when polar bears do it on ice. I call it crazy when my nutjob Chihuahua does the same thing in the grass. nice one Bill.........meeshu

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

So you have a flying Chihuahua?

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I'm wondering if these polar bears actually like sliding across the ice, I'm guessing they do. Great entry in this 5/7/5 poetry contest Bill. Optimistic looking for roadrunners, but optimism is the name of the game. Well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks, Roy.

reply by royowen on 16-Jun-2018

Most welcome

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Clever play on words that imply transportation: taxis, flying, roadrunner. Alliteration in line one, Consonance with polar and bear, taxis and roadrunners. Love the moving image.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks, Shari.

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Haaaaaaaa, now this is just too funny, Bill. Those polar bears do the strangest things when they're looking for takeoff.

I could watch this for another ten minutes, but I might miss my flight.

Most entertaining, Bill.

Gloria

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks, Gloria