Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This horror-based 5-7-5, I Didn't Know, has the proper seventeen syllable set up and kind of sounds like this chick is a pain hickey-giver.

 Comment Written 22-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 23-Jun-2018

The question is is the pain worth it? Thanks for the read and the comment.

Comment from LaFrance

Exceptional

Your poem entry to this 5-7-5 Horror prompt competition was great and met the requirements, What a way to die with those luscious lips sucking the hickey of life from me.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018

Thanks for the read and the wonderful rating.

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the 5-7-7-5 Horror writing prompt.
Your vampire poem is a good match for the picture.
Well done and good luck to you.
Sharon

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks for the read and the review.

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

Now that is just plain creepy. I am not enjoying reading this category at all. Your poem is no exception. I guess that means that you are doing a good job. "Needle like teeth"--now that is awful.

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

I am please by your feeling of awfulness. Thanks for your read and I hope you less creepy after your task is fulfilled.

Comment from Angela Hayes

Excellent

Good read, well presented, good colour, good cosmetics make up, could be theatre,
poem in tune with image, interesting, educational. artistic, well balanced.

Good Luck!

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks for the review and encouraging words. Much Appreciated

reply by Angela Hayes on 16-Jun-2018

You're welcome!

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

You did a good job with this one. All syllables present and correct, which is always nice. lol I read another piece in similar vein earlier. Both should be interesting.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks for the review and encouraging words. Much Appreciated

Comment from Cybertron1986

Excellent

Concise, yet, this captured the essence of the fabled feminine fatale. The presentation subtly provided that needful timing to get to the "needle-like teeth," which began quite provocatively. Well presented and thought out

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

Thanks for the review and encouraging words. Much Appreciated

Comment from meeshu

Excellent

everybody is going for vampires in this contest. what about the horror of psoriasis or terror of Meessohophliopolys (and that is just the commercials)..

 Comment Written 16-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018

I agree, I wish I had another opportunity for an expression of horror in real life. Thanks for the read and the review.

Comment from Mustang Patty

Excellent

Dear Anonymous Poet,

Aha. This five-seven-five is exactly the kind of thing I was looking for in a horror poem. Your artwork and three lines all point to the twist of a good horror writer.

Good luck in the contest,

~patty~

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thank you Patty for the read and encouraging words.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This speaks a fantasy about a vampire, and the poet states the vampire opened the shirt and caressed his neck with bared needle-like teeth, what an experience; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 15-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018

Thank you for the read and the review.