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Comment from nomi338
Better not get into too deep a rut because the coyote might just be hanging around waiting for a chance to pounce and devour. You must vary your route and your routine so that no predator can predict where you might be or what you might be doing at any time.
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Better not get into too deep a rut because the coyote might just be hanging around waiting for a chance to pounce and devour. You must vary your route and your routine so that no predator can predict where you might be or what you might be doing at any time.
Comment Written 16-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Good advice, nomi.
Comment from Ginnygray
A very nice five-seven-five, Bill. The alliteration really stands out and the "r" words are an excellent choice! Thank you for sharing some fine penmanship and clever word choices!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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A very nice five-seven-five, Bill. The alliteration really stands out and the "r" words are an excellent choice! Thank you for sharing some fine penmanship and clever word choices!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Ginny
Comment from Teri7
This is a very cute and well written short poem about the roadrunners race. You used very good and very cute words with good imagery to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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This is a very cute and well written short poem about the roadrunners race. You used very good and very cute words with good imagery to go with your words. I enjoyed reading and reviewing it. Blessings, Teri
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thank you, Teri
Comment from brenda faye curtis
You do have a penchant for finding the strangest photos out there! I have to wonder if these are roads or if the sign is an interesting conversation starter.
At any rate, your 5-7-5 is catchy, and I like it!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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You do have a penchant for finding the strangest photos out there! I have to wonder if these are roads or if the sign is an interesting conversation starter.
At any rate, your 5-7-5 is catchy, and I like it!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Brenda
Comment from frogbook
An alluring and altogether clever act of alliteration announced in this anecdote. Enjoyed, entertained, enticed, and enlightened me.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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An alluring and altogether clever act of alliteration announced in this anecdote. Enjoyed, entertained, enticed, and enlightened me.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thanks, FB
Comment from judiverse
Sounds like these guys are in a rut. Excellent use of alliteration. Could be a tongue twister. Relentlessly adds to the description. I can't believe the road signs--Roadrunner Rut and God's Way Love. Which direction to choose? Maybe the roadrunners keep choosing the wrong direction. judi
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Sounds like these guys are in a rut. Excellent use of alliteration. Could be a tongue twister. Relentlessly adds to the description. I can't believe the road signs--Roadrunner Rut and God's Way Love. Which direction to choose? Maybe the roadrunners keep choosing the wrong direction. judi
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from damommy
Gosh, that's a tongue twister. Great job. Love the sign.
You'll get a lot of material out of the roadrunner and Wyle E. Even without them, it's an interesting subject.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Gosh, that's a tongue twister. Great job. Love the sign.
You'll get a lot of material out of the roadrunner and Wyle E. Even without them, it's an interesting subject.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thanks, da
Comment from Gloria ....
Not sure I really understood this one, Bill, cause it seems like a runaround, but then again maybe that is the point, yes?
A fun read nonetheless and a most odd place to have a road sign. LOL.
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Not sure I really understood this one, Bill, cause it seems like a runaround, but then again maybe that is the point, yes?
A fun read nonetheless and a most odd place to have a road sign. LOL.
Gloria
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from Debbie Pope
I was heading off to sleep until your title drew me in. I just had to read it. What clever use of alliteration. I tried saying it fast five times. What a fun entry. I hope that you win.
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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I was heading off to sleep until your title drew me in. I just had to read it. What clever use of alliteration. I tried saying it fast five times. What a fun entry. I hope that you win.
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Thankd, Debbie
Comment from Mary Hollingsworth
Yep Bill that's the lifestyle of the Roadrunner alright. Continously running, running, running. My mind goes back to the days when I was a kid watching the Lunny Tunes and the kyote was always trying to catch the roadrunner. Great poem best wishes for you in the contest
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Yep Bill that's the lifestyle of the Roadrunner alright. Continously running, running, running. My mind goes back to the days when I was a kid watching the Lunny Tunes and the kyote was always trying to catch the roadrunner. Great poem best wishes for you in the contest
Comment Written 14-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Mary
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My pleasure