I Love to Hate
Silver Lining contest entry4 total reviews
Comment from Marvin Calloway
Your entry in the Silver Lining contest is exceptional. It contained good things to dislike.
Please let me know if you dislike my murder mystery, FOW Play, Chapter 1 to 13, Hospitals.
Marv
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Your entry in the Silver Lining contest is exceptional. It contained good things to dislike.
Please let me know if you dislike my murder mystery, FOW Play, Chapter 1 to 13, Hospitals.
Marv
Comment Written 17-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 18-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the fantastic review and for jumping on as a fan, Marvin. I really appreciate the big sixer for this silly thing. When I get a chance I'll check out your piece. I gotta run right now. Thank you again for the six, friend. I'm glad you liked the piece.
Ron
Comment from Blue Hendrix
Love it! And it is my sentiments exactly pretty much most of the time but hey who am I. Lol! Liked your rhyming and your flow too and it made me laugh so I thought your poem was great and I didn't hate it one bit!
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Love it! And it is my sentiments exactly pretty much most of the time but hey who am I. Lol! Liked your rhyming and your flow too and it made me laugh so I thought your poem was great and I didn't hate it one bit!
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 15-Jun-2018
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Hey, Blue H, hello. Thank you so much for the fantastic review and the big sixer. I sure didn't think I was going to see one of those for this silly thing, lol. I'm glad you a chuckle or two. I really appreciate the gracious stars. Thank you again. Have a wonderful weekend.
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Your very welcome
Comment from Y. M. Roger
Your poem certainly conveys the title well, and the emotion herein is well-suited for the background color you have chosen.
And, although I hate to say it, I would suggest changing "needs mowed" to "needs mowing". Of course, the error could have been intentional to see if anyone actually waded through the darkness here, and I almost hate that I have to tell you I found it. lol
And even though I would hate to end this review on a bright note :) :), I find that I simply have to say that your rhythm is done quite well and probably took you longer than you hate to admit (lol) and I think it would go well with with either a death metal scree or a country twang.....funny how either would work! :) :) :)
I actually look forward to some more of your work that isn't quite so hatefully dark because you definitely have a way with the pen. And I hate that you might hate my bright little five star review.....but here it is! Surprise! :0 ;) ;)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Your poem certainly conveys the title well, and the emotion herein is well-suited for the background color you have chosen.
And, although I hate to say it, I would suggest changing "needs mowed" to "needs mowing". Of course, the error could have been intentional to see if anyone actually waded through the darkness here, and I almost hate that I have to tell you I found it. lol
And even though I would hate to end this review on a bright note :) :), I find that I simply have to say that your rhythm is done quite well and probably took you longer than you hate to admit (lol) and I think it would go well with with either a death metal scree or a country twang.....funny how either would work! :) :) :)
I actually look forward to some more of your work that isn't quite so hatefully dark because you definitely have a way with the pen. And I hate that you might hate my bright little five star review.....but here it is! Surprise! :0 ;) ;)
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Lol. Thank you for the fantastic review, YM Roger. The needs mowed part was a mistake. I've been up all night and getting ready for bed and I'm pretty tired. I'm surprised there wasn't more mistakes than that, hahah. I really appreciate the generous stars and chuckle. Have a great day. Thanks again.
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
This had me laughing, I truly hope that this one wins, not only because it's humorous or that it sounds good, but because it's so true and everyone knows it even if they won't say it, good work
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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This had me laughing, I truly hope that this one wins, not only because it's humorous or that it sounds good, but because it's so true and everyone knows it even if they won't say it, good work
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you for the great review, Phillip. I really appreciate the generous stars. I'm glad you had a chuckle at this silly thing.
