Have Faith
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Comment from nancyrabbrose
I think this is a good antonym poem. The only correction I would give it is to make the last word in lower case letters. It better fits the look of the poem. In fact, it seems that the word "under" is just as important to the poem as "above". Well done.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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I think this is a good antonym poem. The only correction I would give it is to make the last word in lower case letters. It better fits the look of the poem. In fact, it seems that the word "under" is just as important to the poem as "above". Well done.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, I shall have a look with your suggestion in place, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
good job with Antonym piece. It is very simple but yet says so much in very few words. the analogy is a good, strong one .
All the best in the competition.
GMG
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Hi there,
good job with Antonym piece. It is very simple but yet says so much in very few words. the analogy is a good, strong one .
All the best in the competition.
GMG
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Roxanne56
Such a short poem with a very powerful message. Sometimes less is more. You don't need a lot of words to get your message across and you did a great job here. Love the all caps in the word ABOVE, it gives it significant meaning, at lest to me. I hope you do well in the contest. GOD Bless you :)
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Such a short poem with a very powerful message. Sometimes less is more. You don't need a lot of words to get your message across and you did a great job here. Love the all caps in the word ABOVE, it gives it significant meaning, at lest to me. I hope you do well in the contest. GOD Bless you :)
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, I am glad you liked the CAPS, a bit of indifference there with other reviews many thanks****kahpot
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You are welcome and is truly deserved :)
Comment from Bill Schott
This spiritual antonym poem, Have Faith, starts and ends with opposit3 words and forms a powerful promise from God to remember us and bring us up. Neat.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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This spiritual antonym poem, Have Faith, starts and ends with opposit3 words and forms a powerful promise from God to remember us and bring us up. Neat.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mastery
Outstanding poetry, my friend. To the point and could not be said anymore succinctly. I also think you have good taste in choosing the artwork. Bless you and good luck in the contest. Bob
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Outstanding poetry, my friend. To the point and could not be said anymore succinctly. I also think you have good taste in choosing the artwork. Bless you and good luck in the contest. Bob
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review****kahpot
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:) You are welcome. Bob
Comment from victor 66
I believe I understand the concept, the reason, and perhaps the need for faith. I just don't believe in faith myself. That doesn't mean I'm right, and I don't try to convince others they should not have faith. It's interesting that the people I've met who proclaim to be the most religious, are often the least humane. Isn't it amazing how just a few of your words can turn someone else's response into a litany. Good job.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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I believe I understand the concept, the reason, and perhaps the need for faith. I just don't believe in faith myself. That doesn't mean I'm right, and I don't try to convince others they should not have faith. It's interesting that the people I've met who proclaim to be the most religious, are often the least humane. Isn't it amazing how just a few of your words can turn someone else's response into a litany. Good job.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, and I agree with (some) of what you say( the most are often the least humane) many thanks****kahpot
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I don't think anyone should agree with everything I say, and I am just pleased that they might agree with some of what I have to say. You are most welcome.
Comment from Angel Debbie
Under
my umbrella
you shall rise
ABOVE
Short and sweet Faith is even under an umbrella. Thank You for sharing this wonderful little ditty. May God grant you many blessings.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Under
my umbrella
you shall rise
ABOVE
Short and sweet Faith is even under an umbrella. Thank You for sharing this wonderful little ditty. May God grant you many blessings.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi there,
Your Antonym poem does a good job of expressing the word, Faith. Your middle section was well-formed to reflect the two words, under, and above.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Hi there,
Your Antonym poem does a good job of expressing the word, Faith. Your middle section was well-formed to reflect the two words, under, and above.
Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest,
~patty~
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a clever antonym as it embodies a statement of faith in addition to the required opposites. To do thaat in an antonym without actually contradicting yourself I regard as a skilled piece of shortform writing.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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This is a clever antonym as it embodies a statement of faith in addition to the required opposites. To do thaat in an antonym without actually contradicting yourself I regard as a skilled piece of shortform writing.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for this wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from Aussie
Good luck with your contest entry in the Faith Contest. I love Mother Teresa, she really was Christ in action. Never gave thought to her own needs; gave love to all creeds. Excellent entry (sorry, don't like the drawing my friend) with respect. Kace.
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Good luck with your contest entry in the Faith Contest. I love Mother Teresa, she really was Christ in action. Never gave thought to her own needs; gave love to all creeds. Excellent entry (sorry, don't like the drawing my friend) with respect. Kace.
Comment Written 12-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 12-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, please don't say sorry, it is words like this that help, maybe I should have tried to find a more appropriate picture, many thanks, My Freind****kahpot
