Have Faith
When life is down40 total reviews
Comment from SueZen
Beautiful and congratulations on Recognition and All Time Best !
Yes, "under my umbrella you shall rise ABOVE" - the trials and turbulence
of life, when you feel down and find reality hard to cope with. I find great
support in my faith and that renders me humble and grateful for all the
blessings that come my way too, often when most in need of comfort and
guidance.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Beautiful and congratulations on Recognition and All Time Best !
Yes, "under my umbrella you shall rise ABOVE" - the trials and turbulence
of life, when you feel down and find reality hard to cope with. I find great
support in my faith and that renders me humble and grateful for all the
blessings that come my way too, often when most in need of comfort and
guidance.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2018
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Thank you for your excellent and very encouraging review****kahpot
Comment from dragonpoet
Nice stylized sketch of Mother Teresa who lived these words. To try to help the people to rise above their situation. It also is a wonderful definition of faith in general.
Congrats on doing so well in the contest.
Joan
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Nice stylized sketch of Mother Teresa who lived these words. To try to help the people to rise above their situation. It also is a wonderful definition of faith in general.
Congrats on doing so well in the contest.
Joan
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 25-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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No problem.
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Comment from Gert sherwood
Yes, kahpot
I do believe what you are saying when life gets one down, especially when getting older( in years)
needs God holding an umbrella that us will have Faith that --
We will be lifted to His abode.
Gert
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018
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Yes, kahpot
I do believe what you are saying when life gets one down, especially when getting older( in years)
needs God holding an umbrella that us will have Faith that --
We will be lifted to His abode.
Gert
Comment Written 15-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 16-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and yes that was what I was hoping for****kahpot
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You are welcome kahpot
Gert
Comment from kiwijenny
Great antonym poem..good job
Under
my umbrella
you shall rise
ABOVE
The umbrella of faith...all things can rise under that ,..amen
God bless
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Great antonym poem..good job
Under
my umbrella
you shall rise
ABOVE
The umbrella of faith...all things can rise under that ,..amen
God bless
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
Comment from royowen
An excellent entry in this faith poem contest. Yes indeed there's nothing better than being under God's umbrella, or under the banner whose colours can never be lowered. Well done Good luck, blessjngs, Roy
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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An excellent entry in this faith poem contest. Yes indeed there's nothing better than being under God's umbrella, or under the banner whose colours can never be lowered. Well done Good luck, blessjngs, Roy
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 14-Jun-2018
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Thank you for your wonderful review****kahpot
Comment from misscookie
You captured my attention from the start
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem it is a perfect match
Question is that a out liner of mother T
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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You captured my attention from the start
I love the artwork you choose to go with your poem it is a perfect match
Question is that a out liner of mother T
Thank you for sharing
Cookie
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much and yes that is Mother. T****kahpot
Comment from Gloria ....
Hi Kahpot. I very much enjoy antonym poems and your under and above works very well in delivering a positive message. Short, succinct and easy to understand.
My only suggestion is to write faith's umbrella as from the wording alone, ie without the artwork, it would be impossible to know what the poem is about.
that said, a fine job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Hi Kahpot. I very much enjoy antonym poems and your under and above works very well in delivering a positive message. Short, succinct and easy to understand.
My only suggestion is to write faith's umbrella as from the wording alone, ie without the artwork, it would be impossible to know what the poem is about.
that said, a fine job and best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much, and I never thought of that, a great Idea, many thanks****kahpot
Comment from Ryan Stewart
Faith is something that has gotten me through some tough times, so I love the message of this poem. When read "under my umbrella" it made me think of the firmament. Great work!
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Faith is something that has gotten me through some tough times, so I love the message of this poem. When read "under my umbrella" it made me think of the firmament. Great work!
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much for your excellent review****kahpot
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You're welcome
Comment from evesayshi
In my opinion, a stunning and spiritually engaging write - succinct in word, but clear in heartfelt message - perfectly compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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In my opinion, a stunning and spiritually engaging write - succinct in word, but clear in heartfelt message - perfectly compliant with the prompt - best of luck in the contest...
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
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You are indeed welcome...Eve
Comment from Ben Colder
Yes the just lives by faith. We live day by day on this planet seeking the way to go but it is by faith in our Lord that carries us all the way. Best to you in the contest.
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Yes the just lives by faith. We live day by day on this planet seeking the way to go but it is by faith in our Lord that carries us all the way. Best to you in the contest.
Comment Written 13-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 13-Jun-2018
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Thank you very much****kahpot
