Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This one-hundred-word story on the the theme of 'prisoner', A Prisoner's Lament, finds a great deal of comparable feelings between one held prisoner by bad players and the drudgery of entering a writing competition. I see your point.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 22-Jun-2018

Thank you for the great review, Bill. I was just goofing off. It seems whenever I join a prompt I never accomplish anything else until I get that contest piece done first. It doesn't have anything to do with bad players, just being held captive in my own computer chair, lol. I really appreciate the generous stars, Bill. I'm glad you liked this silly thing.

Ron

Comment from E. B. Ross

Excellent

Great entry to The Prisoner writing prompt.



After hour of struggling--I believe you mean hours, or an hour?

"I simply could do nothing else, absolutely
nothing, until I finished the piece for this stupid FanStory contest."...you got me, I didn't see that coming. You've got my vote.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2018

Thank you for the great review and for pointing out the goof, EBR. It was suppose to be 'hours.' I fixed it. I really appreciate the generous stars, friend. I'm glad you liked this silliness. Have a great day.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

I guess you put the con in contest. Did you file your story...if you did you could use it on that chair and get away. I give this 5 bars....I mean..stars.
Well penned ..I,like the twist at the end..
God bless

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2018

Thank you for the great review, kiwi. I really appreciate the gracious stars. I'm glad you liked this silliness.