Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This nonet, Wild Tornado, matches the nine to one format and creates a concrete poem as well in describing the "churning twisting wind" of the tornado. Neat.

 Comment Written 21-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 21-Jun-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from LIJ Red

Excellent

Nonet poem contest winner-can't argue with that success, nor would I after reading the nonet. Even shaped a little like a twister, looks like an excellent post.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018

Thanks so much. Appreciated!

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written Nonet poem about the tornado running across the fields turning everything upside down and misplace many things to other places with a twisting wind.

Congratulations for winning the contest.

 Comment Written 11-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018

Thanks so much!!

Comment from HL Pepper

Excellent

You have used a very nice choice of words that paint a picture as your readers view this poem. Nicely done. Congratulations, and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2018

Thank you!!

Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

This is a great contender for the Nonet poem contest. You describe a tornado like you've actually been caught up in one. Your descriptions describe the funnel very well. Good luck in the contest. Well done!
Judy

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from JDRBAR

Excellent

This definitely describes all the aspects of a tornado. Great picture. It fulfills all the requirements for the contest. Good luck with this in the contest.

 Comment Written 10-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 10-Jun-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from Jeffrey L. Michaux

Excellent

This is a really good description of a tornado. I love the clever wording you use to describe this killer storm. You've done an excellent job presenting this along with the accompanying artwork. It's a spot on addition to this well written poem. Well done!

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018

Thank you for the good review!

Comment from zanya

Excellent

A powerful depiction of the intensity and danger of the tornado when it strikes- Mother Nature has no qualms when she displays her awesome powers -great pic

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from meeshu

Good

an ode to a cyclone in classic shape. far and away my favorite of all the natural disasters. they seem to have purpose the other weather lacks. well done..

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 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018

Thanks so much!

Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

I think this is a good entry for the Nonet Poem writing prompt.
Your verse tells of the tornado very clearly.
Well done and good luck to you with this one in the competition.
Sharon

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018

Thank you.