Comment from the13thpoet

Exceptional

Hello DragonPoet a good day to you. I hope this finds you well. Thank you for reviving and sharing this post, I just loved this poem it seems like we're imagining the same things. Great Job!

 Comment Written 12-May-2022

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reply by the author on 12-May-2022

I am well, thanks. I hope you are too.
I am honored my the six star rating. I am glad you liked it so much
Joan

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

Your contest entry from the past read well, DP. Your ideas
of what you imagine are still so current. I like the repeat
of I imagine and the end rhymes. Everything you mentioned
is true, there's smooth flow, and great imagery.
Thanks for sharing, Jan

 Comment Written 11-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

Thanks, Jan, for thorough and encouraging review.
Joan

Comment from Wayne Fowler

Excellent

Wow! What an imagination!
Utopia plus.
On your 'religion' verse, I think I would have tried to imagine a world where a single truth was universally accepted.
Best wishes and good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 11-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

Thanks, Wayne. I agree, but I don't see how that could happen. I always wondered if God just didn't get bored with just one kind of worship and helped others create different views and left it to us to live like Jesus and accept them all.
Joan

reply by Wayne Fowler on 11-May-2022

True. Until you get to Islam, Buddhism, and the like.

Comment from Wendy G

Excellent

An excellent entry for the contest, and many will identify with and relate to each of your thoughts listed. It reminded me of the John Lennon song. Best wishes for your entry.
Wendy

 Comment Written 11-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

You're not the first to say it reminded you of the John Lennon song.
Thanks for the review.
Joan

Comment from leather

Excellent

I'm not sure that the world you imagine has ever existed, but wouldn't it be wonderful. There is so much to be righted, and I think this poem helps to point that out. Best wishes.

 Comment Written 10-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

Thanks for reading and reviewing. Yes, a lot needs to change.
Joan

Comment from Goosey Gander

Excellent

your poem is so true and deep and heartfelt. I must say, I was hoping to see a gender equality stanza line in there, but I love all of your current stanzas' topics. Congrats and good luck!
-GG

 Comment Written 10-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

Thanks, I will try to think of one. Though it may be hard to rhyme or fit into the meter.
Joan

Comment from R.B.Bunn

Excellent

This was a really nice sentiment and expressed well. The rhythm and cadence was adhered to well and the rhymes were unforced. Thank you for sharing this piece!

 Comment Written 10-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

Thanks and your welcoome.

Comment from LisaMay

Excellent

Nice sentiments, expressed well. Looking after the environment and each other seems to be stuck in the realms of the imagination. John Lennon sang about it and got shot down. Still, dreams and imagination can work miracles, so we must live in hope and do what we can to create a peaceful and respectful world.

 Comment Written 10-May-2022

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reply by the author on 11-May-2022

Thank you, Lisa. We all hope this bit of imagination comes true.
Joan

Comment from Raul1

Excellent

If there only could be a peaceful world but I think that it is unlikely that it would happen. We can only hope that this world comes in peace. Thank you for sharing! Good luck!

 Comment Written 10-May-2022

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reply by the author on 10-May-2022

Thanks for the nice review, Raul. It is sad, but, probably true.
Joan

Comment from emmaysavage

Excellent

This poem reads like a song. I found myself humming. I appreciate your simplicity of language and the depth of your sentiment -- Put a tune to this.

 Comment Written 10-May-2022

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reply by the author on 10-May-2022

Thanks for the short but thorough review. I am glad it made you hum.
Joan