Comment from RFL

Excellent

A well told, yet heart wrenching story from deep within. We often don't understand why young ones are taken from us this way. Yet, you keep Jason's memory alive and he gave life to 4 unknown souls. After all, we are defined by what we leave behind. If I had a six left, I would give it to you. Best, Rona

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018

Why thanks Rona.
And have a blessed day.
Ricky....

Comment from JosieL

Excellent

Such a tragic story. I hope writing it was a helpin the grieving process. I like the way you broke up the story. You are very good with words. The cliff hanger at the end was a pleasant surprise.

 Comment Written 09-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018

Thanks Josiel ad have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Nanny 6

Excellent

WOW! What a tragic story in poem. Written like journal entries, it actually took me back to 2003, like it just happened yesterday. Very well written...so very sad.

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018

Thanks forever Nan.
Ricky.....

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

This is so hard to read but unimaginable to live through
Time cannot be turned back.
King David said, "He cannot come back to me but I can go to him."
What a wonderful reunion in heaven
God bless

 Comment Written 08-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 08-Jun-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Miss Kiwi and have a blessed day.
Ricky....

Comment from karenina

Excellent

Hi. There is no right or wrong way to grieve. It's what works for YOU. If reliving that day over and over helps you to process is I am not the one to tell you no to do it. If it serves to make you relive the pain over and over and over I'd only ask, is this what your son would want for you? He gave life to strangers with his organ donations, I'm sure he'd want you to find peace...

Karenina

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time.
This helps me and maybe someone that has to go through this one day..
Ricky

reply by karenina on 05-Jun-2018

Exactly my friend. Let no one tell you that you ought to be over it, or work the steps of grief. it is what it is in your heart, my friend-and you honor your son always.

Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear

Excellent

This is a nice poem about poet's son Jason who died young, an accident snatched a life; a father feels what is the victory; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018

Thanks again for your wonderful review and time Al Creator.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today

Comment from Phillip C Kuhn

Excellent

The read was interesting, how it was broken up and what not, the story left you wanting more though, I wonder what is about to happen so good cliff hanger, enjoyable read

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018

Thanks Phillip and have a blessed day.
Ricky