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Comment from judiverse
This certainly has a nice musical quality. The "s" sounds contribute to that. Some nice rhyme with surface and purpose and about and doubt. I wasn't expecting that last line! "If tea is served." The condor is ready to take whatever might accompany the tea. Excellent work with this. judi
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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This certainly has a nice musical quality. The "s" sounds contribute to that. Some nice rhyme with surface and purpose and about and doubt. I wasn't expecting that last line! "If tea is served." The condor is ready to take whatever might accompany the tea. Excellent work with this. judi
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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Very welcome. judi
Comment from nomi338
Condors, natures garbage disposals. Most consider them to be despicable, but they serve a purpose that few humans would enjoy performing. These majestic birds are hated by some and are now a protected species, but they are totally necessary.
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Condors, natures garbage disposals. Most consider them to be despicable, but they serve a purpose that few humans would enjoy performing. These majestic birds are hated by some and are now a protected species, but they are totally necessary.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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I had a bag of condor food, but it kept squirming around.
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You is sick. LOL.
Comment from Ginnygray
The condor soars on soft currents of air, looking with purpose for any life moving below. Curious this angel comes to see if tea is going to be served. Interesting take on her prey.
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The condor soars on soft currents of air, looking with purpose for any life moving below. Curious this angel comes to see if tea is going to be served. Interesting take on her prey.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Ginny
Comment from BeasPeas
I like this one very much, Bill. It's "poetic" and a change of pace from the usual amusing pieces. This one is more of a thoughtful flowing piece. Both styles are good, though. Great job. Marilyn
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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I like this one very much, Bill. It's "poetic" and a change of pace from the usual amusing pieces. This one is more of a thoughtful flowing piece. Both styles are good, though. Great job. Marilyn
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thank you, Marilyn.
Comment from damommy
Very smooth to read. Has a soft quality. I think this is lovely. Good alliteration and internal rhymes.
To the little critters below, I'm guessing she's the angel of death.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Very smooth to read. Has a soft quality. I think this is lovely. Good alliteration and internal rhymes.
To the little critters below, I'm guessing she's the angel of death.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thank you, da
Comment from Kerry Foley
"To see if tea is served" lol, you're hilarious, Bill. Another nicely done poem with great humor. Enjoy your day! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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"To see if tea is served" lol, you're hilarious, Bill. Another nicely done poem with great humor. Enjoy your day! ~Kerry
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Kerry
Comment from kiwijenny
How majestic and purposeful.
I would love to glide aloft on soft currents of air
Powerful and hungry
Good poem...and picture
God bless
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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How majestic and purposeful.
I would love to glide aloft on soft currents of air
Powerful and hungry
Good poem...and picture
God bless
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Jenny