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Comment from brenda faye curtis
I get it, and it's a good one! I still find it hard to believe there are so many bizarre pictures out there on the internet to go with the condor material, but I'm glad of it. You wouldn't have a good pranka without this photo!
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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I get it, and it's a good one! I still find it hard to believe there are so many bizarre pictures out there on the internet to go with the condor material, but I'm glad of it. You wouldn't have a good pranka without this photo!
Comment Written 09-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Brenda
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You're welcome, Bill!
Comment from nomi338
Some people are too dumb for words. While it is true that Condors usually feed on carcasses, if you are brain dead, how is the poor bird to know that difference? If you are dumb enough to be thought to be brain dead, keep your distance from one known for feeding off the dead.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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Some people are too dumb for words. While it is true that Condors usually feed on carcasses, if you are brain dead, how is the poor bird to know that difference? If you are dumb enough to be thought to be brain dead, keep your distance from one known for feeding off the dead.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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This was a face off.
Comment from judiverse
Those ill mannered condors. Don't invite them to a dinner party, or you might end up being eaten. Neither would you ask for face time with one of them. I'm thinking your first three lines might be re-arranged to get your point across to better advantage. judi
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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Those ill mannered condors. Don't invite them to a dinner party, or you might end up being eaten. Neither would you ask for face time with one of them. I'm thinking your first three lines might be re-arranged to get your point across to better advantage. judi
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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It?s a tanka format, 57577. Appreciate the input.
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You're welcome. You could still make it clearer without spoiling the syllable count. judi
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Please fetch me some water
a cool cup of water
to ease my parched throat
then the young cowboy said
Multi-platinum song by Marty Robins
Streets of Laredo
What draws one?s attention divides writing and being read.
Comment from closetpoetjester
LOL What a pity he had to lose his face to find this out Bill!
Remind me NEVER to be rude to a condor hahaha
Great poem
You never fail to make me giggle, laugh or downright cack myself!
Cheers P
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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LOL What a pity he had to lose his face to find this out Bill!
Remind me NEVER to be rude to a condor hahaha
Great poem
You never fail to make me giggle, laugh or downright cack myself!
Cheers P
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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I learned a new word today. It rhymes with hack, and sack, and jack. I had to look it up. Thanks.
Comment from lyenochka
What a picture! Either the condor is exceptionally large or the guy is particularly small. Yes, I wouldn't want anyone's face that close to the condor's beak. Fun one, Bill.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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What a picture! Either the condor is exceptionally large or the guy is particularly small. Yes, I wouldn't want anyone's face that close to the condor's beak. Fun one, Bill.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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I don?t know that the picture isn?t enhanced, but condors can have up to a nine foot wing span.
Comment from damommy
A huge bird! Whatever he does, I'm on his side. lol
He doesn't look like he's remembering his manners. Chuck needs a new teaching method, apparently.
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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A huge bird! Whatever he does, I'm on his side. lol
He doesn't look like he's remembering his manners. Chuck needs a new teaching method, apparently.
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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He wears a hockey goalie mask now. and trains canaries.
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LOL LOL LOL
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks about the confidence of a teacher finding the effect of teaching and learning of his condor and he discovers countenance learning is impossible; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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This speaks about the confidence of a teacher finding the effect of teaching and learning of his condor and he discovers countenance learning is impossible; well said, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thanks, ALD
Comment from kiwijenny
Bad puns are how eye roll. Yep countenance learning... I guess Chuck's surname is Illed
Because that's what I did I chuckled. Puns always get a groan. I don't know why unless it's because people are jealous . I used to say pick a word to a friend and we'd pun until everyone left the parking lot...in droves.
God bless...is the condor's name Anna....
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Bad puns are how eye roll. Yep countenance learning... I guess Chuck's surname is Illed
Because that's what I did I chuckled. Puns always get a groan. I don't know why unless it's because people are jealous . I used to say pick a word to a friend and we'd pun until everyone left the parking lot...in droves.
God bless...is the condor's name Anna....
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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It used to be. Now it?s ....H - uk - zwaise
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Aitch uck?s face
Ate Chuck?s face
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Oh ha ha ha