Comment from nomi338

Excellent

Whew! At first I thought this was condom man. I was all the way into the rhyme and song. That is until I realized that the word was Condor man. I must say that this gives things a totally different slant.

 Comment Written 06-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018

If the condom man gets you, you're effed.

reply by nomi338 on 06-Jun-2018

Truth.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

I'm afraid I'm not a fan of Spiderman, so I don't know the tune. A Condor's got to do what a Condor's got to do, even if it means eating a head. Hanging from a threat sounds like a reference to Spiderman and his antics. Great fun. judi

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 05-Jun-2018

You're welcome. judi

Comment from Kerry Wanstall

Excellent

Bill, congratulations on writing a pithy, witty, clever poem. With your carefully chosen words you've made some interesting points.

 Comment Written 05-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018

I have? Thanks.

reply by Kerry Wanstall on 05-Jun-2018

Yes. LOL

Comment from kahpot

Excellent

Well done I read it again after reading your notes and I will admit understood a lot better, as I don't know is Condorman a character? or is he yours? I like this read well done****kahpot

 Comment Written 04-Jun-2018

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reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018

Just a quicky poem to get me over the condor hump. Thanks for giving it a look.