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Comment from nomi338
Wow! I can think of a few offensive people who are prime candidates for being carried off by a Condor to free the earth of their vile presence. I don't think I need to call any names, the guilty know who they are.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
Wow! I can think of a few offensive people who are prime candidates for being carried off by a Condor to free the earth of their vile presence. I don't think I need to call any names, the guilty know who they are.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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I have number you can call.
Comment from BeasPeas
This one, I like, Bill. Illustrated by an amazing sculpture. I can picture the condorman dining alfresco. Interesting pictorially and clever wording. Marilyn
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
This one, I like, Bill. Illustrated by an amazing sculpture. I can picture the condorman dining alfresco. Interesting pictorially and clever wording. Marilyn
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thank you, Marilyn.
Comment from Raul1
Excellent poem! I see that this person flew over the entire city. I don't think I could do that, or all the people can do it as well, but with a flying it is possible. Interesting. He also dives too and had his fresh glass of drink. Great job!
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
Excellent poem! I see that this person flew over the entire city. I don't think I could do that, or all the people can do it as well, but with a flying it is possible. Interesting. He also dives too and had his fresh glass of drink. Great job!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Raul
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You're welcome.
Comment from lyenochka
Fun one, Bill. I like your word play of "carri-off" instead of condors' favorite food of "carrion." I think that the word 'al fresco' is written as two words. That chianti must be a hazard to flying.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
Fun one, Bill. I like your word play of "carri-off" instead of condors' favorite food of "carrion." I think that the word 'al fresco' is written as two words. That chianti must be a hazard to flying.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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All sources have alfresco as one word. The exception would be Allen (Al) Fresco. (chortle, sigh)
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Interesting. "Al' is a preposition so I would have thought it separate. Dictionary.com has it both ways and Cambridge has it has two:
https://dictionary.cambridge.org/dictionary/english/al-fresco
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Don?t trust Cambridge; they think labor is spelled with an ?ou?. (Humorous utterance)