The Book of Fine Poetry
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Comment from friartuck
Based on impact alone, that's a solid six! The way you've framed it is very effective, and your word/visual choices are excellent as well. The reader is drawn in, and joins you in mourning your loss. At least I was. Riveting!
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Based on impact alone, that's a solid six! The way you've framed it is very effective, and your word/visual choices are excellent as well. The reader is drawn in, and joins you in mourning your loss. At least I was. Riveting!
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Thanks for this and have a blessed day.
Dr Ricky 1024.Later today
Comment from karenina
I am glad you are able to write this out. It is therapy for grief that will never disappear totally but which help to process. Giving your son a voice in this poem is important to...for he will always have a relationship with you, from here to heaven.
Karenina
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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I am glad you are able to write this out. It is therapy for grief that will never disappear totally but which help to process. Giving your son a voice in this poem is important to...for he will always have a relationship with you, from here to heaven.
Karenina
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Thanks Karenina, just added the art Work.
Ricky....
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Ah. Love that image....looks like the conversation is in progress as the two travel along.....
