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Comment from nomi338
Clever, I am happily surprised to learn that you are capable of some very fine work. You are doing a very good job of changing my opinion of Marines, past, present an even future Marines. LOL.
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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Clever, I am happily surprised to learn that you are capable of some very fine work. You are doing a very good job of changing my opinion of Marines, past, present an even future Marines. LOL.
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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Duhhhh. Tanks.
Comment from damommy
Good one! I once worked with a funeral director who wore that shirt off-duty.
Love the play on words with 'carrion.'
Condors seem to provide a lot of meat for your poem. lol
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Good one! I once worked with a funeral director who wore that shirt off-duty.
Love the play on words with 'carrion.'
Condors seem to provide a lot of meat for your poem. lol
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thanks, da
Comment from brenda faye curtis
This is another cutie, Bill, but not cute like a condor, 'cause those critters are hideous! I do love the poem, which pairs so well with the artwork.
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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This is another cutie, Bill, but not cute like a condor, 'cause those critters are hideous! I do love the poem, which pairs so well with the artwork.
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Brenda.
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from judiverse
No wonder the condors almost went extinct. They had so much carrion luggage they couldn't fly. Great work with your rhyme, and delicious pun with carrion. Oh, I don't think I meant delicious. What a gloomy picture of those birds just hanging around, waiting. judi
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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No wonder the condors almost went extinct. They had so much carrion luggage they couldn't fly. Great work with your rhyme, and delicious pun with carrion. Oh, I don't think I meant delicious. What a gloomy picture of those birds just hanging around, waiting. judi
Comment Written 02-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 02-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Judi, for giving this a look. Bill
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You're quite welcome. Enjoy the weekend. judi
Comment from Raul1
Excellent poem! Yes, of course we do need to move on and not take our bad pasts personal. We learn from them by not doing them again. It is a simple and friendly advice to use. Great job!
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Excellent poem! Yes, of course we do need to move on and not take our bad pasts personal. We learn from them by not doing them again. It is a simple and friendly advice to use. Great job!
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Raul
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You're welcome.
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
What a clever and fun play on words. I enjoy those in poetry. Funny choice of photo and your format for the 5-7-5 is well done. It made me smile...enjoy the humorous tone.
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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What a clever and fun play on words. I enjoy those in poetry. Funny choice of photo and your format for the 5-7-5 is well done. It made me smile...enjoy the humorous tone.
Comment Written 01-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 01-Jun-2018
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Thanks, Cindy