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A 4 line free verse poem

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Comment from Joy Graham
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Ahahahaha! You made me giggle over this one. My muse left me when I was sick. She didn't leave me any sassy notes like this. She just left me to be sick on my own while she went off to refresh herself. I'm pleading with her to come back now, though.

I think this is a fantastic contest entry which makes me seriously doubt my own entry. Best wishes in the contest.

Joy xx

 Comment Written 28-May-2018


reply by the author on 28-May-2018
    Hi Joy, Glad you had a laugh and of course a bit of fun on her expense. I am aure your entry will be great Best wishes to you too Cheers Christine
Comment from aryr
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Awwww Christine, what a shame that your poor muse needed a bread and just up and left. At least she did promise to return, but I have my faith that you have a very creative mind and pen, so go do it. (smile) I loved the picture choice. Well done, thank you for sharing your loss with us.

 Comment Written 28-May-2018


reply by the author on 28-May-2018
    Hi Ary, Thanks for your review and a bit of fun for me this time I try to be creative and my muse will just have to put up with this one on return LOL Cheers as always Christine
reply by aryr on 29-May-2018
    Christine you are so very welcome, creative is positive, so go get em.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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Well, I hope she hurries back Chrissy.
This is a great & fun poem for the contest.
Good luck & thanks for sharing.
Best wishes. Jan

 Comment Written 28-May-2018


reply by the author on 28-May-2018
    Hi Jan, A late last night thought for this contest, I wonder what she will think upon return she may just go again LOL Cheers my friend Christine
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi there;

Thank you for sharing this well-written four-line poem that so many of us can relate to. It is really horrible when our muses desert us for a vacation or time off. It always seems to be at the most inconvenient time.

I hope your muse returns soon,

~patty~

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 Comment Written 28-May-2018


reply by the author on 28-May-2018
    Hi Patty, My muse needs a rest at times so I wing it alone LOL really just a bit of amusement to keep me happy, she may dissapear completely Na too hooked on this site Ha Ha Cheers Christine