Unforgotten
true love83 total reviews
Comment from trimple
Oh arn't you the clever one.
A cracking last line to this poem that really lends enormous gravitas to the whole piece.
I can see why this won the competition, Twosocks
Well done :)
much love
twilight
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Oh arn't you the clever one.
A cracking last line to this poem that really lends enormous gravitas to the whole piece.
I can see why this won the competition, Twosocks
Well done :)
much love
twilight
Comment Written 09-Jul-2018
reply by the author on 09-Jul-2018
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Hi Twilight, ten years...and I finally was in poem of the month...LOL...won third place...and I was soooo happy...there was alot of great talent up there...thank you sweet lady for going back and reading my poem...and for alllll your lovely stars...and an awesome review....love ya much...linda xxoo
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well, at least you got there in the end :)
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I expect to see you up there many times over...now get to work...LOL...smiling back at ya...xxoo love
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I wish :)
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great !!!! that's what I like to here...LOL...keep up the positive attitude...love ya girl...xxoo
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aww... thank you, sweetheart.
Comment from MissMerri
Linda... I just saw this and realized it has the same title as a poem I wrote recently. I am sorry I inadvertently chose the same title, but it was purely an accident. I hope you didn't think I was attempting to copy you. I love your poem. It has sort of a fifties feel to it, that brings back so many special memories. I'm sure your readers all enjoyed this one very much. It was a poem of the month selection too, which shows it was especially popular. Congratulations! (I was looking for something to review from you, since it seems like it has been a long while since I read one of your poems)
I hope you are doing well. Keep writing. MM (BTW, I changed my title after I realized we had chosen the same one.)
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Linda... I just saw this and realized it has the same title as a poem I wrote recently. I am sorry I inadvertently chose the same title, but it was purely an accident. I hope you didn't think I was attempting to copy you. I love your poem. It has sort of a fifties feel to it, that brings back so many special memories. I'm sure your readers all enjoyed this one very much. It was a poem of the month selection too, which shows it was especially popular. Congratulations! (I was looking for something to review from you, since it seems like it has been a long while since I read one of your poems)
I hope you are doing well. Keep writing. MM (BTW, I changed my title after I realized we had chosen the same one.)
Comment Written 25-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 29-Jun-2018
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Hi Adonna, please forgive me for not getting back to you...my computer has been in the shop 5 days and I just got it back...please don't think about us having the same titles...you didn't have to change yours...I would never think you would copy anything...you have a talent for writing...I was happy to see my poem go in for poem of the month...and even more amazed it came in third...I was up there with some awesome writers...thank you for stopping by...and for a wonderful review...God Bless...Linda xxoo
Comment from Sloane.T
I can so relate to your words here. You showcased the message I've had in my heart for years. From the first love experience, to the one that got away, you said it beautifully. True love never washes away.
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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I can so relate to your words here. You showcased the message I've had in my heart for years. From the first love experience, to the one that got away, you said it beautifully. True love never washes away.
Comment Written 20-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 20-Jun-2018
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Hi Sloane, I know what it is like to keep that love in your heart...only to replay it in my mind as the years go by...thank you for a wonderful review...and for going back and reading my poem...thank you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Tootie
Wow! This is really good! And the photo that goes with it is perfect. I'm glad I stopped by and read this. So much said in these few lines and so true. Thank you! Blessings, Cathy
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Wow! This is really good! And the photo that goes with it is perfect. I'm glad I stopped by and read this. So much said in these few lines and so true. Thank you! Blessings, Cathy
Comment Written 16-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 17-Jun-2018
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Hi Cathy, thank you so much for your awesome review...and thank you for all your lovely stars...I am so glad you like it...you are so welcome...and Blessing to you as well...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Dawn Munro
Wow - how did I miss this? Not only is it a genre I love, it's so exquisitely written, Linda - flawless word choices and metaphor. True love IS EXACTLY as you describe, even when it is still being experienced. Congratulations on a deserved POM nomination, my friend!
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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Wow - how did I miss this? Not only is it a genre I love, it's so exquisitely written, Linda - flawless word choices and metaphor. True love IS EXACTLY as you describe, even when it is still being experienced. Congratulations on a deserved POM nomination, my friend!
Comment Written 11-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 11-Jun-2018
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WOW Dawn...!!! what and awesome review sweet angel...it came in third...and I was very happy with that...I was up there with some with some of the best...honored...sigh...thank you my sweet friend...love you so much...Linda xxoo
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OH!!!! I am so very happy for you, Linda. Congratulations! I'm very sorry I didn't review it sooner!
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that's ok...I'm still happy...it did well for my first time ever in the Poem of the Month...smilingggggg...xxoo
Comment from RFL
You have captured a universal experience in just a few lines. Sometimes I think that life is just a compilation of memories. We can't wait for some super adventure or event, and then it passes so quickly. So what do we have left? Only memories for us alone to remember. Great work. Thank you, Rona
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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You have captured a universal experience in just a few lines. Sometimes I think that life is just a compilation of memories. We can't wait for some super adventure or event, and then it passes so quickly. So what do we have left? Only memories for us alone to remember. Great work. Thank you, Rona
Comment Written 06-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 06-Jun-2018
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Hi Rona, I am so glad you like my poem...thank you so much for a wonderful review...I think you are so right...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Bridget Myer
An emotive piece,
Well written, and a true depiction of love lost, love lived, and reminiscence.
These memories become a companion ray of hope and a feeling of being worthy.
All these fit together to form a powerful poem.
Well done
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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An emotive piece,
Well written, and a true depiction of love lost, love lived, and reminiscence.
These memories become a companion ray of hope and a feeling of being worthy.
All these fit together to form a powerful poem.
Well done
Comment Written 05-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 05-Jun-2018
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Hi Bridget, so good to see you my sweet friend...I am so glad you like it...thank you for a wonderful review...and for going back and reading my poem...God Bless...love you...Linda xxoo
I hope you are doing well....
Comment from LIJ Red
Especially that first real love when you are growing up. The memory really does hang on until the lights go out. Selected as a contestant for poem of the month-I won't argue with that.
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Especially that first real love when you are growing up. The memory really does hang on until the lights go out. Selected as a contestant for poem of the month-I won't argue with that.
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hi LlJ, thank you so very much for a wonderful review....I am so glad you like it...I couldn't believe it was in there...that alone is an honor...thank you...Love Linda xxoo
Comment from livelylinda
Linda: WOW!! I am truly impressed. This is a powerful little poem filled with emotion not really stated but implied and it makes the reader stop reading to let it all sink in. You've done it good with this one, my friend. I guess we do get better with age . . . LOLOLOLOLOLOL. And, congratulations on winning the Poem of the Month! You have become poetic royality! from the Dos.
Linda: this is a fabulous poem! In just a few words you have made it thick with feelings . . . it made me stop and really think about what you were saying. It definitely gave me something to think about. WOW!! is my rating to you! Dos
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Linda: WOW!! I am truly impressed. This is a powerful little poem filled with emotion not really stated but implied and it makes the reader stop reading to let it all sink in. You've done it good with this one, my friend. I guess we do get better with age . . . LOLOLOLOLOLOL. And, congratulations on winning the Poem of the Month! You have become poetic royality! from the Dos.
Linda: this is a fabulous poem! In just a few words you have made it thick with feelings . . . it made me stop and really think about what you were saying. It definitely gave me something to think about. WOW!! is my rating to you! Dos
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Hey you goof...poem of the month is not over...go check the days...thank you for the win...but I think you have to wait till the last vote is in...LOL.LOL...LOL...you are tooooo funny...thank you for your wonderful Stars...and your wonderful review....where have you been????...so glad you like my poem...Love you Uno...xxoo
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Did you win the contest??? Linda
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Hi Dos, I came in third...but that is great...it's my first Poem of the Month...and I was up there with some wonderful writers...very happy...so good to see you sweet girl...will call you soon...love you....Uno...xxoo
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Oh, I really, really like this one, Linda. A one-seat theater is the only way to remember some things. Excellent presentation and very effective imagery. I'm gonna go vote. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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Oh, I really, really like this one, Linda. A one-seat theater is the only way to remember some things. Excellent presentation and very effective imagery. I'm gonna go vote. :) Nancy
Comment Written 04-Jun-2018
reply by the author on 04-Jun-2018
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HI Nancy, WOW!!!...thank you so much for all your wonderful stars...and a wonderful review...and thank you for the vote...smiling big...so glad you like it...Love you...Linda xxoo