I know two young men well.
A short story about marathon runs.14 total reviews
Comment from Rasmine
Hello, Robina, :)
I found one typo:
His explanation was because he works full-time now, that ('and' not 'that') he needed the rest of his time for private business. He meant visiting relatives and friends (maybe put 'visiting relatives and friends' instead of 'for private business').
Take care,
Nome
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Hello, Robina, :)
I found one typo:
His explanation was because he works full-time now, that ('and' not 'that') he needed the rest of his time for private business. He meant visiting relatives and friends (maybe put 'visiting relatives and friends' instead of 'for private business').
Take care,
Nome
Comment Written 27-May-2018
Comment from Old Soldier
Sorry for your loss. You where blessed with many wonderful years together. I too was a runner in my youth. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading
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Sorry for your loss. You where blessed with many wonderful years together. I too was a runner in my youth. Thanks for sharing and keep writing and reading
Comment Written 27-May-2018
Comment from Michael Steinert
It is strange sometimes how people disappear sometimes after they recieved something. I'm glad you are still able to stay in touch with your family especially with all that distance
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It is strange sometimes how people disappear sometimes after they recieved something. I'm glad you are still able to stay in touch with your family especially with all that distance
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Comment Written 27-May-2018
Comment from barbara.wilkey
One of my son's and his wife run marathons. I enjoy it. I am NOT into that. I do enjoy long walks, but not running. Thank you for sharing this post with us.
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reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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One of my son's and his wife run marathons. I enjoy it. I am NOT into that. I do enjoy long walks, but not running. Thank you for sharing this post with us.
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Comment Written 27-May-2018
reply by the author on 27-May-2018
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thanks for your review, Ine. have a nice week.
