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Comment from brenda faye curtis
Too bad her husband wasn't one of the survivors, the poor headless fellow! I( love the play on words and the odd art that does, indeed remind me of a praying mantis. Nice one!
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
Too bad her husband wasn't one of the survivors, the poor headless fellow! I( love the play on words and the odd art that does, indeed remind me of a praying mantis. Nice one!
Comment Written 26-May-2018
reply by the author on 26-May-2018
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Thanks, Brenda
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You're welcome, Bill!
Comment from meeshu
a very cute post, bill. the praying mantis is the coolest critter with the coolest name. not as practical as the ant or bee but cool...........meeshu
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
a very cute post, bill. the praying mantis is the coolest critter with the coolest name. not as practical as the ant or bee but cool...........meeshu
Comment Written 25-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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Thanks, meeshu
Comment from Ginnygray
Well, Bill, this poor mantis caught ptsd or pmsd, post mantis stress disorder. Where was this little mantis found to catch such a disease? Anyway, a very clever 5-7-5 in the mantis world, and now he is struggling to survive. All lines have the correct syllables. Enjoyed.
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
Well, Bill, this poor mantis caught ptsd or pmsd, post mantis stress disorder. Where was this little mantis found to catch such a disease? Anyway, a very clever 5-7-5 in the mantis world, and now he is struggling to survive. All lines have the correct syllables. Enjoyed.
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 25-May-2018
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It would actually be the survivors of a praying mantis attack who would develop this probl3m. The mantis sleeps like a baby.
Comment from lyenochka
Cool picture. I guess every creature has the potential for some kind of stress disorder. Good P- and S- alliteration and that last line "survivor's struggle" is a serious problem for many.
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
Cool picture. I guess every creature has the potential for some kind of stress disorder. Good P- and S- alliteration and that last line "survivor's struggle" is a serious problem for many.
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from Ulla
Hahahah, Bill, this is so cleverly written. You should have entered it in the 5=7=5 completion. Yeah, it is seriously good. You are just so good with words. All the best. Ulla:)))
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
Hahahah, Bill, this is so cleverly written. You should have entered it in the 5=7=5 completion. Yeah, it is seriously good. You are just so good with words. All the best. Ulla:)))
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from Kerry Foley
Ha-ha, lol You are just so funny, Bill. A very silly and clever 5-7-5 poem.
You should have entered it in a 5-7-5 contest. Nice one:))) ~Kerry
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
Ha-ha, lol You are just so funny, Bill. A very silly and clever 5-7-5 poem.
You should have entered it in a 5-7-5 contest. Nice one:))) ~Kerry
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks, Kerry.
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You're welcome:)
Comment from Gloria ....
Haaaaaaa, another disorder to get all worried about. This PMSD sounds like the worst of all and when you actually witness this master of the universe dispatch his enemies, you can see the anxiety is not unfounded.
A most entertaining post, Bill. I laughed.
Gloria
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
Haaaaaaa, another disorder to get all worried about. This PMSD sounds like the worst of all and when you actually witness this master of the universe dispatch his enemies, you can see the anxiety is not unfounded.
A most entertaining post, Bill. I laughed.
Gloria
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks, Gloria
Comment from nomi338
Run for your life! He is back and he's heading this way! Oh my God he looks pissed, what are we gonna do? Quick everybody let's pray that he doesn't come this way! Wait. Never mind, it was just my imagination again, sorry folks.
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
Run for your life! He is back and he's heading this way! Oh my God he looks pissed, what are we gonna do? Quick everybody let's pray that he doesn't come this way! Wait. Never mind, it was just my imagination again, sorry folks.
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Most insects who survive an encounter with praying mantis die within a week (as they would have anyway)
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Wait. How do you know so much about insects. Are you a closeted teacher?
Comment from Mustang Patty
Hi, Bill;
I love your new disorder. I think flies could relate to this well, but I have to wonder how many of them actually escape and experience PMSD. Well done, as always,
~patty~
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
Hi, Bill;
I love your new disorder. I think flies could relate to this well, but I have to wonder how many of them actually escape and experience PMSD. Well done, as always,
~patty~
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks, Patty
Comment from judiverse
I hope you are planning to put all of your critters in a book. It would be quite colorful. While I can't get too concerned about a praying mantis's PMSD, it must be a big issue with mantises. The survivor's struggle is an apt conclusion. Any species has that struggle. Nice alliteration in the words. judi
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
I hope you are planning to put all of your critters in a book. It would be quite colorful. While I can't get too concerned about a praying mantis's PMSD, it must be a big issue with mantises. The survivor's struggle is an apt conclusion. Any species has that struggle. Nice alliteration in the words. judi
Comment Written 24-May-2018
reply by the author on 24-May-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You're quite welcome. judi