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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from brenda faye curtis
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Too bad her husband wasn't one of the survivors, the poor headless fellow! I( love the play on words and the odd art that does, indeed remind me of a praying mantis. Nice one!

 Comment Written 26-May-2018


reply by the author on 26-May-2018
    Thanks, Brenda
reply by brenda faye curtis on 26-May-2018
    You're welcome, Bill!
Comment from meeshu
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a very cute post, bill. the praying mantis is the coolest critter with the coolest name. not as practical as the ant or bee but cool...........meeshu

 Comment Written 25-May-2018


reply by the author on 25-May-2018
    Thanks, meeshu
Comment from Ginnygray
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Well, Bill, this poor mantis caught ptsd or pmsd, post mantis stress disorder. Where was this little mantis found to catch such a disease? Anyway, a very clever 5-7-5 in the mantis world, and now he is struggling to survive. All lines have the correct syllables. Enjoyed.

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 25-May-2018
    It would actually be the survivors of a praying mantis attack who would develop this probl3m. The mantis sleeps like a baby.
Comment from lyenochka
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Cool picture. I guess every creature has the potential for some kind of stress disorder. Good P- and S- alliteration and that last line "survivor's struggle" is a serious problem for many.

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Thanks, lyenochka
Comment from Ulla
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Hahahah, Bill, this is so cleverly written. You should have entered it in the 5=7=5 completion. Yeah, it is seriously good. You are just so good with words. All the best. Ulla:)))

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Thanks, Ulla
Comment from Kerry Foley
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Ha-ha, lol You are just so funny, Bill. A very silly and clever 5-7-5 poem.
You should have entered it in a 5-7-5 contest. Nice one:))) ~Kerry

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Thanks, Kerry.
reply by Kerry Foley on 25-May-2018
    You're welcome:)
Comment from Gloria ....
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Haaaaaaa, another disorder to get all worried about. This PMSD sounds like the worst of all and when you actually witness this master of the universe dispatch his enemies, you can see the anxiety is not unfounded.

A most entertaining post, Bill. I laughed.

Gloria

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Thanks, Gloria
Comment from nomi338
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Run for your life! He is back and he's heading this way! Oh my God he looks pissed, what are we gonna do? Quick everybody let's pray that he doesn't come this way! Wait. Never mind, it was just my imagination again, sorry folks.

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Most insects who survive an encounter with praying mantis die within a week (as they would have anyway)
reply by nomi338 on 24-May-2018
    Wait. How do you know so much about insects. Are you a closeted teacher?
Comment from Mustang Patty
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Hi, Bill;

I love your new disorder. I think flies could relate to this well, but I have to wonder how many of them actually escape and experience PMSD. Well done, as always,

~patty~

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Thanks, Patty
Comment from judiverse
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I hope you are planning to put all of your critters in a book. It would be quite colorful. While I can't get too concerned about a praying mantis's PMSD, it must be a big issue with mantises. The survivor's struggle is an apt conclusion. Any species has that struggle. Nice alliteration in the words. judi

 Comment Written 24-May-2018


reply by the author on 24-May-2018
    Thanks, Judi
reply by judiverse on 24-May-2018
    You're quite welcome. judi