Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

This is so serene and magical Robina, I was riding on your words and I especially loved the last five lines, but the whole poem is a joy to read, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 21-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely second Whitsum Day.

Comment from apky

Excellent

What a delightful poem, Robina, so romantic.

You found the best of words and arranged them with great
rhyme and rhythm, bringing out the joys of passions.

Drums of joy are in my heart

I'll feel a soft heat in my soul

Your eyes shine as a bright star

I'll be then in the heaven of love

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 21-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely second Whitsum Day.

Comment from aanneee

Excellent

Wonderful wordage and wonderful to read that you still have such wonderful feelings after 35 years. Don't quite know what else to say other than...wonderful...Dinah

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 21-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely second Whitsum Day.

Comment from Lifeisjess

Good

Very beautifully written, I love the way you express the feeling of love in just a few short words
Exceptional work

This line in particular is my favourite
I'll feel a soft heat in my soul
So true and described perfectly

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 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 21-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely second Whitsum Day.

Comment from patcelaw

Excellent

This is a good poem I only had a little problem with one line. Patricia

Your eyes shine as brighter a star

This line might flow better as
your eyes shine as a bright star.




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 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 21-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and good second Whitsum day. I might try your suggestion, thanks.