Comment from meeshu

Excellent

I love the sentiment that is expressed in your work. I am not familiar with this poetry form, I need to do the research and come back to your poem, to be fair. this is a good write, Robina.........meeshu

 Comment Written 23-May-2018

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reply by the author on 24-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.

Comment from l.raven

Excellent

Hi Ine, it is wonderful to wake up to that man you love...
to look in his eyes...and know he loves you...I love your poem sweet girl...and your colors and picture are beautiful...love you...Linda xxoo

 Comment Written 22-May-2018

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reply by the author on 24-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.

reply by l.raven on 24-May-2018

your soooo welcome...and you have a wonderful evening...love xxoo

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

This is the narrator's reflection on the loved one she has lost. The longing is conveyed very well with the mention of desire to see the light in his eyes, as it reminds her of the sun rising on a new day. There is a longing to be there in the heaven of love. Your word choices work well. You might do us a favor by increasing the font size or having more contrast in colors to make it easier to read. judi

 Comment Written 22-May-2018

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reply by the author on 24-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a good last part of the week.

reply by judiverse on 24-May-2018

You're welcome, and take care. judi

Comment from dragonpoet

Excellent

It is a nice love poem that says that his eyes express all the love in his heart. And that look provides the light and warmth in your heart.

I don't think you need the 'are" in the fourth line. I think the last line could be
'showing me the way to heaven.

Keep writing

dragonpoet

 Comment Written 22-May-2018

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reply by the author on 22-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely week.

reply by dragonpoet on 22-May-2018

No problem. Same to you.

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Comment from Rasmine

Excellent

Hello, Robina, :)

Good poem. Is this for the club event? I just read a similar one of Barb Hensongispca.

I found one typo I think:
I'll be then (did you mean 'there'?) in the heaven of love

 Comment Written 22-May-2018

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reply by the author on 22-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely week. No, but I could say that.

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

One should always be fortunate to have someone close to love. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. There is good imagery.

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 22-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely week.

reply by c_lucas on 23-May-2018

You're welcome, Ine.

Comment from royowen

Excellent

I guess you must miss your hubby, when we come to the end of the line, the light goes, and the life of the light no longer shines, may you see the light again friend Ine, beautifully written, well dine, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 21-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Whit day. Yes, I do.

reply by royowen on 21-May-2018

My pleasure

Comment from Boogienights

Excellent

This is lovely, so nicely written and presented. I assume this is about love and the way it can make you feel, and the image you paired it with is striking. I feel every word you have written is about my husband and I.

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 21-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely Whit day.

reply by Boogienights on 21-May-2018

Comment from Dutchie

Exceptional

This poem is wonderful, Ine with well chosen words that express emotions of love.
It's a serene love poem with a nice flow. I don't know very much about the ghazal poem, but I think it's great!! Well done. Fia

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 21-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely second Whitsum Day.

Comment from Michael W Hogan

Excellent

You've managed to capture a lot of emotion and beg the imagination to fill in the blanks of the backstory with this poem, Robina1978. The kaleidoscope of color and Rorschach-effect of your image complemented the words very well. Bravo! Michael

 Comment Written 21-May-2018

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reply by the author on 21-May-2018

Thanks for your kind review, Ine. Have a blessed and lovely second Whitsum Day.