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Animal poetry and short stories

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Comment from Ginnygray
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I'm giving you a review, but Bill this is mighty gruesome!! A praying mantis eating bird's eyesocket's or brains is certainly info that I would not like to dwell on! Mother Nature can be so cruel and beastly!

 Comment Written 18-May-2018


reply by the author on 18-May-2018
    Sorry, Ginny
Comment from nomi338
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Ewwww, You just had to do it didn't you. I never said that I doubted you, it was just a shock to learn that Mantis' had that much power and strength. Wow, I am now reevaluating my opinion of the Mantis.

 Comment Written 18-May-2018


reply by the author on 18-May-2018
    I've seen a picture of one the size of an ear of corn.
reply by nomi338 on 18-May-2018
    Wow! Now I am afraid.
Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
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That is disgusting--not your poem--the pm that does this! I did not know this & hope I never see it again. Hummingbirds are too precious for this! Although I do not like the topic, you did a great job with it. Jan

 Comment Written 18-May-2018


reply by the author on 18-May-2018
    Thanks, Jan.
Comment from Gloria ....
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Lord love a duck! What is that praying mantis doing? I had no idea they were that powerful. No wonder they consider themselves masters of the universe.

It's an insect eat bird world. Great poem and good bit of information.

Many thanks for the share.

Gloria

 Comment Written 17-May-2018


reply by the author on 18-May-2018
    Thanks, Gloria. I?m afraid I?ve really dented the praying mantis? fan base with this dirt on hummingbirds.
Comment from lyenochka
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Yuck! That's one of my favorite birds! Sigh. I didn't know this. I can't imagine that the mantis could even catch that fast-moving bird. I think you're making up for the horror gap left by Dean.

 Comment Written 17-May-2018


reply by the author on 18-May-2018
    If only. Dean seems to be back though.
Comment from BeasPeas
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OMGoodness, this is so bizarre. How awful is that! Nature has its way of turning on its inhabitants. I don't know what I thought preying mantisesssesss ate, but didn't expect this. Wow! Marilyn

 Comment Written 17-May-2018


reply by the author on 18-May-2018
    Thanks, Marilyn.
Comment from royowen
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I must admit I was a little shocked by this terrible picture. (My own petty squeamishness) but that is one incredible photo, hummingbirds must be tiny. (Don't have any here! Beautifully written Bill, in tetrametric quatrains and aabb rhyming, skilfully done, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 17-May-2018


reply by the author on 17-May-2018
    Thanks, Roy, for the great review. Bill
reply by royowen on 17-May-2018
    Welcome Bill.
Comment from Alexander Vasa
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Hey Bill, that picture is something else. I never knew praying mantis did that. You do realize this image will stay with me for the rest of my life, LOL

I thought they were nice little stick creatures that fed off dew and flower honey, I have completely changed my opinion thanks to your well written poem, which I enjoyed a lot. Nothing to fix, and thanks for sharing your writing, Ana.

 Comment Written 17-May-2018


reply by the author on 17-May-2018
    Thanks, Ana, for the great review. Bill
Comment from judiverse
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Yuck! Gross! I just had dinner! I'm glad you're paying well for this one. It's too ugly for words. The picture is unbelievable. I suppose this is justified in the name of education. And they think people are bad! Not even Al Quaida would think of doing something like this. Do the female praying mantises dance while this it taking place?

 Comment Written 17-May-2018


reply by the author on 17-May-2018
    Praying Mantis are fantastic. They have thousand different types.
reply by judiverse on 17-May-2018
    Oh, no. I didn't realize there were so many different types. All bad, I suppose. judi
Comment from Ulla
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Oh, dear, Bill, I didn't know that the mantis would do such a horrible thing. I love the hummingbird.I've just ad the pleasure of seeing them yet again in Massachusetts. They don't exist anywhere outside the Americas. Great poem. All the best.Ulla:))

 Comment Written 17-May-2018


reply by the author on 17-May-2018
    Thanks, Ulla