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Comment from frogbook
Have read all but not able to review each one. I've always liked praying mantis but you are starting to make me feel a bit different with these evil stories-haha.
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Have read all but not able to review each one. I've always liked praying mantis but you are starting to make me feel a bit different with these evil stories-haha.
Comment Written 17-May-2018
reply by the author on 17-May-2018
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Thanks, FB
Comment from lyenochka
Cool picture. And fun pun of the "pray it won't return." But I dont' think it could eat a bird unless it's a really small one. But then again, it is an "artist's conception."
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Cool picture. And fun pun of the "pray it won't return." But I dont' think it could eat a bird unless it's a really small one. But then again, it is an "artist's conception."
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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I have a pictur3 with a pm eating a bird. Don?t know if he caught it though.
Comment from Ginnygray
First two lines connect nicely and
Is the big round blob inside a sticky shaped body! Bird's praying the mantis doesn't return! Interesting art work!
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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First two lines connect nicely and
Is the big round blob inside a sticky shaped body! Bird's praying the mantis doesn't return! Interesting art work!
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thank you, Ginny.
Comment from nomi338
Wait. A Mantis ate a bird? Inconceivable! That must have been one heck of a Mantis. One that super would be one that I myself would be fearful of. I never thought of them being that powerful or dynamic. I guess "Fear The Mantis!" is a valid cry after all.
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Wait. A Mantis ate a bird? Inconceivable! That must have been one heck of a Mantis. One that super would be one that I myself would be fearful of. I never thought of them being that powerful or dynamic. I guess "Fear The Mantis!" is a valid cry after all.
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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I don?t know if he caught it, but I have a picture of a praying mantis eating a small bird.
Comment from judiverse
This one is going to be a tough series. How will you stir up sympathy for a praying mantis? Interesting artwork. It makes me think I could draw. It's in the minimalist tradition, I'd say. I agree with your last line, "Pray it won't return." These critters get no sympathy from me. Cleverly done. judi
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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This one is going to be a tough series. How will you stir up sympathy for a praying mantis? Interesting artwork. It makes me think I could draw. It's in the minimalist tradition, I'd say. I agree with your last line, "Pray it won't return." These critters get no sympathy from me. Cleverly done. judi
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thanks, Judi
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You're welcome. judi
Comment from damommy
That's certainly an odd drawing of a pretty insect. I'd hate to see the praying mantis that could eat a bird! That would be something to reckon with. lol
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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That's certainly an odd drawing of a pretty insect. I'd hate to see the praying mantis that could eat a bird! That would be something to reckon with. lol
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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I have a picture of one eating a sparrow.
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Yikes!
Comment from Boogienights
Another great series of poems featuring some interesting bugs. I love the way you format the poem and of course the humor thats in each one. Keep them coming.
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Another great series of poems featuring some interesting bugs. I love the way you format the poem and of course the humor thats in each one. Keep them coming.
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 16-May-2018
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Thanks, BN