Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

My husband had a knee replacement on Monday. I can empathize with you and your hip. I'm so glad you are up to writing beautiful poetry
Well penned
God bless.

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.
Hope your husband recovers as well as I am doing. Knee is harder I understand but many are done today as well. Welcome to the robot generation.

Comment from Pam (respa)

Excellent

-Nice image and presentation.
-I am glad you are doing well, and
sharing all of your special magical fairy poems, Dan.
-I like how you combine the aspects of the fairies
with what you have been going through.
-This is done very well in verse two,
as well as the conclusion.

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.

reply by Pam (respa) on 18-May-2018

You are welcome.

Comment from rspoet

Excellent

This is another fine fairy poem
perhaps they sprinkled some of their fairy dust upon you
to help you heal quickly, so you can once more walk in the park
Excellent photograph to match your words
Best wishes to you
RS

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.

Comment from karenina

Excellent

How great to hear your recovery is swift and sure! Your poetry sings of new hope and a bright future and I am sure I speak for all of your poet friends here when I say
thank God, the Divine Healer, for hearing our prayers! What a magical joyful poem!

Karenina

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.

reply by karenina on 18-May-2018

Keep up the rehab!

Comment from writerjen

Excellent

Very creative poem, good imagery and descriptive language. Good rhyme, too. Especially liked, Slowly the Fairies shimmer, Fragile creatures of purest beauty
Find the change so complete, Marvel that again the muse can sing'. Perfect picture to accompany this poem, too. Didn't take away from the overall meaning. Good luck with your recovery from surgery.

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.

Comment from duchessofdrumborg

Excellent

"Alluring Dreams Unfold", is an extremely well-written and delightfully descriptive piece. This talented poet's work was a pleasure to both read and review. I look forward to seeing your next post.

 Comment Written 17-May-2018

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reply by the author on 17-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.

reply by duchessofdrumborg on 17-May-2018

danpaid, as always, you're very welcome.

Take care, God bless you and best wishes,

the Duchess

Comment from Swampfox1

Excellent

What a world that would be where dreams come true. Fairies real and being seen by all, wow! "Fragile creatures of purest beauty" . The only thing I question is as to why the fairies are doing such things. Thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 16-May-2018

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reply by the author on 16-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.

Comment from Mrs. KT

Excellent

Hello Dan,
I have read of your recent challenges, and I surely appreciate that you are able to put said challenges into poetic verse. More importantly, I am so pleased that you are on your way to living pain-free. Your verse is gentle and filled with optimism:
My favorite stanza:

The world of pain now behind
Moving to dreams with strides
Touching the realms of nature
Beauty captured in its unfolding

Best Wishes and thank you for sharing!
diane

 Comment Written 16-May-2018

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reply by the author on 16-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.

Comment from Cindy McIntyre

Excellent

Wow! So glad you are feeling better every day. This is a lovely poem to help aid you in your journey to getting completely well. I love that you mention you will soon walk in the park and search for a lark!

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Thanks for the comments.

Comment from mermaids

Exceptional

It is so wonderful to be reading about fairies. I hope your recovery is going well. You take the reader to a pleasant place with your words. "Marvel that again the muse can sing" is a line that makes the reader feel good. Glad you are back.

 Comment Written 15-May-2018

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reply by the author on 15-May-2018

Thanks for the comments. Thanks for the six stars.