Comment from Air Spirit

Excellent

Magical and mystical, as your poems typically are.. you take me on a journey, and it's one filled with mystery and an ethereal lingering presence... your joy shines through your words, budding beautifully with the help that spring brings... I am so glad you are healing every day, and I have NO doubt that they magic the fairies bring you is helping you, guiding you and aiding in your health and well being.. thanks for sharing this bit of morning magic with me!

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Comment from The Death

Excellent

Your poem is whimsical and captures the joy of Spring very nicely. Glad you're feeling well now, and the same can be read through your words. Fine use of random rhymes make it flow well. The last lines convey how the nature has power to heal our pain indirectly.

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Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

A very well-written poem and I am very glad you are feeling so much better. I understand your frustration with the pain, it is very draining emotionally and physically when we are in constant pain.

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Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Your strength is slowly returning and it amazes me how the body has the ability to heal and your poem reflects your upbeat mood and tenacity to improve, love Dolly x

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Comment from Phillip C Kuhn

Excellent

Very whimsical, worded well and conveyed the sense of hope and a better tomorrow, it gave an artistic view as well as literary, overall the reader enjoyed the read, good stuff

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Comment from rjuselius

Exceptional

aaawwww. this is such a sweetheart of a poem dear danpald! i love mythical creatures and mystic events and you have all of those in your poem
thanks for sharing!
blessibgs and a hearty squeeze!
rebekka x

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Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

That's great news, Dan. So much better not to have live with constant pain and now you can share the fun things that make up the joy of Spring. Fairies included.

Excellent and my pleasure to read and review.

Gloria

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Comment from Sharon Haiste

Excellent

Welcome back.
I'm glad that you are recovering so rapidly. I would suggest not overdoing it.
Your verse is lovely and I enjoyed it.
Sharon

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Comment from ameen786

Excellent

What a beautiful melodious rhymer with lovely verses, "Back to wondering the poet moves,"-Hallelujah! Thanks for sharing your delightful write and so good to know that you are feeling great and it shows in this vibrant poem.

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Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

Danpald, good to see you back. I was only thinking of you the other day. Glad to read you are on the up and up:-) Thank you for sharing this semi rhymed poem. It is good to know spring will be putting a spring in your step pretty soon and your muse will be getting some exercise too. Best of luck with your recovery. ~DD

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