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Comment from judiverse
Deep thoughts from the sponge contemplating eternity. He suddenly finds himself out of the water, and all alone in a strange place. It could be heaven, or maybe a diver left him behind. That's quite a picture you found. A sponge is posing. Your cinquain format is just right. judi
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Deep thoughts from the sponge contemplating eternity. He suddenly finds himself out of the water, and all alone in a strange place. It could be heaven, or maybe a diver left him behind. That's quite a picture you found. A sponge is posing. Your cinquain format is just right. judi
Comment Written 13-May-2018
reply by the author on 13-May-2018
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Thanks, Judi. Sponges can be deep.
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You're welcome. All the sponges have to do is absorb information. judi
Comment from nomi338
Just imagine how a sponge surrounded by water must feel, on full every day every minute, every hour. That is pretty much how I feel on a day when I have gorged myself with food and drink. LOL.
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Just imagine how a sponge surrounded by water must feel, on full every day every minute, every hour. That is pretty much how I feel on a day when I have gorged myself with food and drink. LOL.
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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That's a lot of drink.
Comment from BeasPeas
Terrific job on this one, Bill. Love it. Image is perfect for your words. It reinforces and conveys the "alone" comment in the poem. Reader is drawn right into it. Marilyn
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Terrific job on this one, Bill. Love it. Image is perfect for your words. It reinforces and conveys the "alone" comment in the poem. Reader is drawn right into it. Marilyn
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thank you, Marilyn, for the nice review. Bill
Comment from Kerry Foley
A pretty neat cinquain poem, Bill. You sure get into the sponge character with your little sponge poems, lol. I must absorb the fun! ~Kerry
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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A pretty neat cinquain poem, Bill. You sure get into the sponge character with your little sponge poems, lol. I must absorb the fun! ~Kerry
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thanks, Kerry
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You're welcome, Bill.
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Excellent, Bill. I'm sure it would be heaven for a sponge not to be completely surrounded by water. This is a really good cinquain, and goes well with your Sponge World poem, as does the picture as well. :)) Sandra xx
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Excellent, Bill. I'm sure it would be heaven for a sponge not to be completely surrounded by water. This is a really good cinquain, and goes well with your Sponge World poem, as does the picture as well. :)) Sandra xx
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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Thanks, Sandra
Comment from meeshu
do you think sponges ever tire of being saturated, do they go to rehab to dry-out? as they dry do you think chafing is an uncomfortable issue. do you think I think too much about sponges. you started it Bill.......meeshu
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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do you think sponges ever tire of being saturated, do they go to rehab to dry-out? as they dry do you think chafing is an uncomfortable issue. do you think I think too much about sponges. you started it Bill.......meeshu
Comment Written 11-May-2018
reply by the author on 11-May-2018
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I'm sorry if I sponginated your thinking. It's a real problem. : )
