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Comment from Jannypan (Jan)
Michael, This is a great free verse. I really like the presentation--the art, the color scheme, the layout of the words, & the message. It is Meia (MESAYERS) OR Kiwigirl, although it could be both or neither that I believe that is your inspiration. Your poem is 'that good.' Thanks for sharing. Jan
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Michael, This is a great free verse. I really like the presentation--the art, the color scheme, the layout of the words, & the message. It is Meia (MESAYERS) OR Kiwigirl, although it could be both or neither that I believe that is your inspiration. Your poem is 'that good.' Thanks for sharing. Jan
Comment Written 11-May-2018
Comment from meeshu
very good Michael. free thought just rolling out as you try to understand a muse. hard to do and even harder to communicate with them..........meeshu
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very good Michael. free thought just rolling out as you try to understand a muse. hard to do and even harder to communicate with them..........meeshu
Comment Written 11-May-2018
Comment from karenina
It is that good! I do not know of whom you speak but the magic of poetry snags on the words here and raises the bar for all of us to try harder...to your writer of honor it may be easy as breathing...for some of us we will never reach that level...oh, but though I cannot finger paint I am captivated by VanGoh's "Starry Starry Nght."
Karenina
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It is that good! I do not know of whom you speak but the magic of poetry snags on the words here and raises the bar for all of us to try harder...to your writer of honor it may be easy as breathing...for some of us we will never reach that level...oh, but though I cannot finger paint I am captivated by VanGoh's "Starry Starry Nght."
Karenina
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from apky
I think this is very good, at least in my humble opinion.
I know I'm no poet, but I know quality when I read it.
And I think she'll be honoured. Honestly.
when you rise in the morning
we mingle atop the same waters
you, the light
me, what is under the light
I am aware
and that is enough
if it's poetic
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I think this is very good, at least in my humble opinion.
I know I'm no poet, but I know quality when I read it.
And I think she'll be honoured. Honestly.
when you rise in the morning
we mingle atop the same waters
you, the light
me, what is under the light
I am aware
and that is enough
if it's poetic
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from DionysusDeVille
This is definitely a great ode to the poet of whom you speak of. I can see the influence that she has on you and that she inspires you. The comedic banter really brings out the meat of this poem
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This is definitely a great ode to the poet of whom you speak of. I can see the influence that she has on you and that she inspires you. The comedic banter really brings out the meat of this poem
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from Cindy McIntyre
How nice to write such a warm and intriguing poem about a poet on FanStory. I loved your free verse. They are my favorite type of poetry. We never know who we might inspire as we write. This was very imaginative and well-written.
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How nice to write such a warm and intriguing poem about a poet on FanStory. I loved your free verse. They are my favorite type of poetry. We never know who we might inspire as we write. This was very imaginative and well-written.
Comment Written 10-May-2018
Comment from Katya
Oh what a trip! That's wonderful! How lucky you are that you get to pursue your poetry girl! I love the twists and turns of this poem, its undulating sounds and rhythms. Thank you!
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Oh what a trip! That's wonderful! How lucky you are that you get to pursue your poetry girl! I love the twists and turns of this poem, its undulating sounds and rhythms. Thank you!
Comment Written 10-May-2018