Comment from Richard J

Exceptional

I enjoyed the entirety of this excellently composed and presented image and emotion laden Haiku, Susan.
In my heart it was a winner ... congratulations on the gold ribbon.
Splendidly done, I thank you ever-so gratefully for sharing ... happy hugs to you.
I love it! ~ Richard : )

 Comment Written 08-May-2018

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reply by the author on 09-May-2018

Thank you Richard for this wonderful review!!! Much appreciated. :-)

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This 5-7-5, Waiting For Spring, has the right set up and captures the bird preparing to leave the safety of the bushes for the allure of Spring. Nice.

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 06-May-2018

Thanks Bill, I took that pic.."we" were both watching yet another wisconsin snowstorm....lol on 4/15!

Comment from Debbie Pope

Excellent

I like this--a lot. I like to see it as an interpretation of the photo. It is so secluded, I can hardly see the bird. What I can see of the bird shows calmness and waiting. You just know that spring is on its mind. And the bird is so caught up in the tree, it does appear that nature is trying to caress it. Great job in seeing the bird in the first place.

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 06-May-2018

Thanks Debbie, I took that picture..funny, "we" were both watching yet another winter storm here in Wisconsin.. LOL and wishing for Spring!

Comment from Swampfox1

Excellent

A good entry into the writing prompt contest or whatever it is. "Secluded dwelling;

Winter's caressing embrace...

Calmly waits for Spring."
Is this about a bird's nest? That is what I feel it is. Thanks for sharing

 Comment Written 06-May-2018

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reply by the author on 06-May-2018

Thanks for te review...birds nest? no...just a prompt about birds...I took the picture, during another winter storm here in Wisconsin...thinking how "we" are both waiting on spring.

reply by Swampfox1 on 06-May-2018

you're welcome and thanks for the reply