FAMILY TIES.
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Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks poet misses much ever his baby sister, she is never forgettable, her memory ever knocks the poet; happy that she can be talked if not touched or seen; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
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This speaks poet misses much ever his baby sister, she is never forgettable, her memory ever knocks the poet; happy that she can be talked if not touched or seen; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 05-May-2018
Comment from Roxanna Andrews
This is very beautiful, a very nice tribute to your sister. I am so sorry for your loss. I too lost my youngest sister to cancer and there is not a day I don't think of her. It is hard, but knowing she with the Lord and I will see her again is a great comfort. Very well done.
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This is very beautiful, a very nice tribute to your sister. I am so sorry for your loss. I too lost my youngest sister to cancer and there is not a day I don't think of her. It is hard, but knowing she with the Lord and I will see her again is a great comfort. Very well done.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
Comment from Eternal Muse
Oh, this was so moving and touching. My deepest condolences. She must have been very special. You chose great words to bring out that, though she is no longer with us, she is above us in heaven:
I cannot hear you.
But your voice is in my ear.
Although you're far above us now.
We will always remember.
She is in heaven now, looking down at us, and she knows you wrote this poem for her.
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Oh, this was so moving and touching. My deepest condolences. She must have been very special. You chose great words to bring out that, though she is no longer with us, she is above us in heaven:
I cannot hear you.
But your voice is in my ear.
Although you're far above us now.
We will always remember.
She is in heaven now, looking down at us, and she knows you wrote this poem for her.
Comment Written 05-May-2018