Now, Wadya say?
Worst pome ever challenge.13 total reviews
Comment from Liz O'Neill
This has great "tongue-in-cheek " humor. Very fun. I like how you played with the words. It carries a hidden message. Who's really listening? A great ending. Well written.
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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This has great "tongue-in-cheek " humor. Very fun. I like how you played with the words. It carries a hidden message. Who's really listening? A great ending. Well written.
Comment Written 16-May-2018
reply by the author on 26-Jun-2018
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Hi Liz, apologies for such a late response... thank you for the review!
Comment from tfawcus
What's not to like about this unmitigated slob? I guess that what you see is what you get. Even if you pass up his kind offer, it may just have been enough to win you a cash prize in some daft Worst Pome Ever contest! One star for him and four for you - for giving him the time of day!
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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What's not to like about this unmitigated slob? I guess that what you see is what you get. Even if you pass up his kind offer, it may just have been enough to win you a cash prize in some daft Worst Pome Ever contest! One star for him and four for you - for giving him the time of day!
Comment Written 12-May-2018
reply by the author on 12-May-2018
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Ha! Thanks Tony for the great review! this was a fun contest..hehehe
Comment from Marge Setzer
On the positive side, your rhymes work. And the asides add an unexpected touch, although the lack of them in stanzas four and seven show a lack of consistency in structure. But the criteria asked for the worse poem ever and kudos, you achieved it. Beautiful use of misspelled words, bad grammar, insensitivity from our hero, and crude remarks rates an A from this teacher. It is the best of the best. My third graders would have had a difficult time perfecting a poem such as this. As for chickadee, I do wonder about her response. Thanks for sharing. This was a hoot. Marge
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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On the positive side, your rhymes work. And the asides add an unexpected touch, although the lack of them in stanzas four and seven show a lack of consistency in structure. But the criteria asked for the worse poem ever and kudos, you achieved it. Beautiful use of misspelled words, bad grammar, insensitivity from our hero, and crude remarks rates an A from this teacher. It is the best of the best. My third graders would have had a difficult time perfecting a poem such as this. As for chickadee, I do wonder about her response. Thanks for sharing. This was a hoot. Marge
Comment Written 06-May-2018
reply by the author on 06-May-2018
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Hey Marge, thanks for the review. I do appreciate it! LOL it was a bit tricky writing a terrible pome...heheh but super fun! Her response? Take a hike!!! haha
Comment from Harry Smith
Great picture selection for this worst pome ever contest entry. The poem is filled with lots and lots of imagery as well as emotions. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Great picture selection for this worst pome ever contest entry. The poem is filled with lots and lots of imagery as well as emotions. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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Hi Harry, Thanks for the review!! :-)))))))))))))))
Comment from meeshu
that is pretty bad alright, Susan. the first one I've seen so I have nothing to compare. yours is cleverly lousy on several fronts, so good luck in the contest....meeshu
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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that is pretty bad alright, Susan. the first one I've seen so I have nothing to compare. yours is cleverly lousy on several fronts, so good luck in the contest....meeshu
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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It IS bad!!!! hahahaha But I had fun writing it! thanks for the review! :-)
Comment from Alcreator Litt Dear
This speaks at a worst pome challenge for marriage at the cheapest price at a church when 100% happiness is guaranteed for a year to expire thereafter, what more to say; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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This speaks at a worst pome challenge for marriage at the cheapest price at a church when 100% happiness is guaranteed for a year to expire thereafter, what more to say; well written, well done. Keep Writing -- DR ALCREATOR
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 09-May-2018
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:-) It was a fun write! Thanks for the review!! :-)
Comment from Teri7
lol lol You did a really good on this worse poem ever! lol You used words that made sense but went perfect for the contest. Pretty grungy looking guy in the photo too! Best wishes in the contest! love, Teri
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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lol lol You did a really good on this worse poem ever! lol You used words that made sense but went perfect for the contest. Pretty grungy looking guy in the photo too! Best wishes in the contest! love, Teri
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Thank you Teri, I had a little fun with this one! LOl
Comment from Phillip C Kuhn
this piece got a couple chuckles out of me, the picture used says just as much as the words do haha, but it was worded well, I enjoyed it, good read.
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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this piece got a couple chuckles out of me, the picture used says just as much as the words do haha, but it was worded well, I enjoyed it, good read.
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Glad it made you smile! This was a fun write :-)
Comment from Joy Graham
Oh my goodness. That picture sure sets the mood for awful. There's a reason he hasn't gotten hitched yet lol! Good job on the bad pick up lines. Good job at grossing me out. Good job of tossing in some spelling errors and such. I think you nailed it for the contest. Something to be proud of lol!
Joy xx
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Oh my goodness. That picture sure sets the mood for awful. There's a reason he hasn't gotten hitched yet lol! Good job on the bad pick up lines. Good job at grossing me out. Good job of tossing in some spelling errors and such. I think you nailed it for the contest. Something to be proud of lol!
Joy xx
Comment Written 04-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Hi Joy! Thank you for the fun review!..I had fun writing this silly piece :-)
Comment from Gloria ....
Haaaaaaaaaa, this is BAD, very, very bad and probably the worst poem I've ever read and now I am so envious I don't know what I'm going to do.
Super job with the contest prompt, you got absolutely every part of bad poetry in there that could possibly exist.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Haaaaaaaaaa, this is BAD, very, very bad and probably the worst poem I've ever read and now I am so envious I don't know what I'm going to do.
Super job with the contest prompt, you got absolutely every part of bad poetry in there that could possibly exist.
Best of luck to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 03-May-2018
reply by the author on 04-May-2018
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Ha! Glorie thank you!...I don't know if you remember a person here by the name Domino (ray)..When i joined he tried to teach me about Iambics/meter and such. Anyway, he tells me to send him one stanza. I did. His response? " Not only did you not follow any suggestions, that was the corniest line I have EVER EVER READ!" LOL Every time I think about that, I laugh! This was a fun challenge...sometimes it's just fun to be a bit silly! :-)
