A mother
3-5-3 contest entry35 total reviews
Comment from Swampfox1
Nice cute little poem. I see this poem was the contest winner. Cool, very cool. I am not a fan of such short poems but yours does carry a message across and I seem to remember voting for it. Great job. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Nice cute little poem. I see this poem was the contest winner. Cool, very cool. I am not a fan of such short poems but yours does carry a message across and I seem to remember voting for it. Great job. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Awesome review swampfox1. Thank you for the support as well.
God bless!
Steve
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You're welcome
Comment from catch22
Hello Poet, this is a lovely little 3/5/3 poem. I enjoyed the rhyme of other and mother, and the consonance of L sounds was pleasing to read. Congratulations on the win.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Hello Poet, this is a lovely little 3/5/3 poem. I enjoyed the rhyme of other and mother, and the consonance of L sounds was pleasing to read. Congratulations on the win.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Thank you for the excellent review catch 22.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Artasylum
Hey NEONEWMAN,
The Charcoal drawing is beautiful and simple. Like a Mother's love is. Your poem is perfect pitch. Good luck in the contest. I will keep my fingers crossed. thanks. yours, diana
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Hey NEONEWMAN,
The Charcoal drawing is beautiful and simple. Like a Mother's love is. Your poem is perfect pitch. Good luck in the contest. I will keep my fingers crossed. thanks. yours, diana
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Thank you for the awesome review Artasylum. I ended up winning!
God bless!
Steve
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Yes! Congratulations!!!!!
Comment from lyenochka
Congratulations on your win! I think that this says so much and so succinctly. It could also win the Mother's Day poem, too! Most of us would agree that a mother's love is like no other. Well done.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Congratulations on your win! I think that this says so much and so succinctly. It could also win the Mother's Day poem, too! Most of us would agree that a mother's love is like no other. Well done.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Thank you lyenochka for the congrats along with a stellar review.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from krys123
Cheers Neonewman;
-I do like a 5/7/5 syllabic format that is very concise and to the point with a conceptual theme that is universal. Your 5/7/5 is just that.
-Mothers are an unconditional love or as close to than any other family member or person on the street.
-Good luck in the contest, my friend, and take care and have a good one especially with all those that love you dearly.
Alex
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Cheers Neonewman;
-I do like a 5/7/5 syllabic format that is very concise and to the point with a conceptual theme that is universal. Your 5/7/5 is just that.
-Mothers are an unconditional love or as close to than any other family member or person on the street.
-Good luck in the contest, my friend, and take care and have a good one especially with all those that love you dearly.
Alex
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Thank you for this most excellent review Krys123. I do love my mother.
God bless!
Steve
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You're very welcome my dearest friend, Steve, and take care and have a good one.
Alex
Comment from Pantygynt
This is a very simple statement but of course it is true. Its truth is self defining for should a female parent not display "love like no other" then she is not, effectively, worthy of the title of mother, whatever the biological situation might be.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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This is a very simple statement but of course it is true. Its truth is self defining for should a female parent not display "love like no other" then she is not, effectively, worthy of the title of mother, whatever the biological situation might be.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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I absolutely agree Pantygynt. Thank you for the awesome review my friend.
God bless!
Steve
Comment from Heather Knight
Yes, it's a special type of love. I still see my children as if they were babies sometimes and feel kind of nostalgic when I realize how quickly time has passed.
Lovely little poem. I like the picture as well.
Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Yes, it's a special type of love. I still see my children as if they were babies sometimes and feel kind of nostalgic when I realize how quickly time has passed.
Lovely little poem. I like the picture as well.
Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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They do grow quickly! My mom still thinks the same way your do and she is 76. Thank you for the excellent review my friend.
God bless
Steve
Comment from Dean Kuch
Yes, I would have to agree, mothers are a very special breed indeed, Steve.
It's easy to see why this did so well in the contest.
It's short but meaningful and the accompanying artwork added the perfect touch.
Congratulations on your contest win.
~Dean
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Yes, I would have to agree, mothers are a very special breed indeed, Steve.
It's easy to see why this did so well in the contest.
It's short but meaningful and the accompanying artwork added the perfect touch.
Congratulations on your contest win.
~Dean
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Thank you Dean, hope to be on here a bit more in the near future. We are finally going into escrow on the new home(which i will be moving my parents in with me for the rest of their lives) that will be interesting lol. So hopefully we will be set up and in house within a couple of weeks.
Thank you for the great review my friend.
God bless
Steve
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"A Mother", is short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to read this talented poet's delightful work. I look forward to reading your next post. To me, this is a six. but unfortunately I only have fives left.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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"A Mother", is short, succinct and very much to the point. It was a pleasure to read this talented poet's delightful work. I look forward to reading your next post. To me, this is a six. but unfortunately I only have fives left.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Thank you duchess for the amazing review my friend. I do enjoy the short works.
God bless!
Steve
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Steve, my pen-pushing friend, you're more than welcome.
Take care, God bless you and best wishes,
the Duchess
Comment from Zue65
Congratulations, this poem deserved to be a winner. The limited poetic form is a challenge for any author. To be able to deliver a spot on message in so few words is a skill quite difficult to master. But you did it so well in this work.
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Congratulations, this poem deserved to be a winner. The limited poetic form is a challenge for any author. To be able to deliver a spot on message in so few words is a skill quite difficult to master. But you did it so well in this work.
Comment Written 05-May-2018
reply by the author on 05-May-2018
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Thank you Nassus for the awesome, rewarding review my friend. I do enjoy the short pieces.
God bless
Steve
