Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Hi Bill. I'm back now that (hopefully) the yukky stuff is overwith. Great job with this won. Cute and clever. We are into sponges now. I can handle that I think. Marilyn

 Comment Written 04-May-2018

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reply by the author on 05-May-2018

Thanks, Marilyn. Glad you're back.

Comment from Cass Carlton

Excellent

Right I'm in! I'll just sit 'n soak it up. I'll just brush off the critics and keep the suds
in my bubble bath frothed up . (Note to self) Ignore alien form and keep washing. cheers Cass

 Comment Written 03-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Bubble up.

Comment from Ulla

Excellent

Hahahahahaha. Yeah, too right, Bill. We sure can begin 'the absorbing story of the lowly sponge'. I love it. You have such a wonderful imagination. A great 5-7-5poem. All the best. Ulla:))

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 03-May-2018

Thanks, Ulla

Comment from lyenochka

Excellent

Lol. I like the word play of the "absorbing" story. I wouldn't know how to do dishes without my sponge but because it can hold bacteria, I make sure to change them frequently.

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

Thanks, lyenochka

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

This is my kind of student, a blank slate ready to absorb a world of knowledge. If he makes a mistake, he cam just wipe the board clean and start again. How can you go wrong with a guy like this?

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

Spongerific

Comment from Gloria ....

Excellent

Haaaaa, well you sure didn't pick the most attractive sponge in the ocean, Bill. But I guess vis-à-vis the life of sponges this is as good a sink sponge as you'll ever find.

Most witty poem.

Gloria

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

Thank you, Gloria

Comment from frogbook

Excellent

She's kin of a plain jane this one, probably not the most popular sponge in the sea. Lol. Love the "punish" nature of your poem-clever and funny.

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

Some say it's a 'pun'ishment to read it.

Comment from judiverse

Excellent

Reviewers will really be soaking up your sponge series. Fun play on the word "absorbing." This is fun, and you always come up with some good artwork. Don't forget to mention my late uncle, who used to sponge off the family. He was pretty low. You have your 5-7-5 syllable count down correctly. judi

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

Thanks, Judi

reply by judiverse on 02-May-2018

You're very welcome. judi

Comment from Dolly'sPoems

Excellent

Well this is obviously the start of another series of sponge writes from your camp Bill! What can you say about a sponge? I guess I will find out very soon, yes they are going to be an absorbing story book, love Dolly x

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

Thanks, Dolly

Comment from JanPerry

Excellent

Lovely I was completely absorbed by the tiny sponge. In my case it would have to be a mattress sponge. Ha.
I'm hoping to read more about the sponge in the future.

 Comment Written 02-May-2018

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reply by the author on 02-May-2018

Thanks, Jan